story- It simply lacks momentum, it goes from the MC's getting comfy with his editor to a sister with brocon to something that you can no longer say where it is heading.
Art- There were only just a handful of good fanservices around and quite frankly the original creator should've just gamble with having his works to have a lot of fanservices.
Character- I'll make this short, none of them make it both the male and female MC.
Overall: Original creator ,Gokugetsu, Momo, should've just made this either a smut, pornographic or hentai.
So, very much not recommended.
