An ambitious undertaking for sure. However, one that, even with 24 episodes, was not executed well. The pacing often either stagnates or jumps around; while the overall story can be followed despite this, what the characters experience feels off. Something intense happens one moment, then whiplashes to another mood the next. Two events may be happening at once, but they don't share similar qualities, sometimes they conflict, causing confusion in the viewing experience. Thus, the pacing feels, incoherent at times.
I am not one to suggest alternatives to the plot to make the story better; that would make an entirely different material. But I will say that there are elements with potential that could've been used to more naturally and further develop characters. It is brought up several times, "what is an Etoile?" This show would have you believe it is the most popular person(s) on campus, but I believe the characters think it represents more than just that. Without much spoilers, as an unused element, I think it's high up there. Another element would be the wider world. The entire show takes place on Astraea Hill, an isolated campus. But the world beyond the campus is almost never mentioned; not for describing someone's past, nor for their future. If characters were to think beyond their campus, or relate their campus to the wider world, some developments would be more natural.
Perhaps my biggest criticism with this show is how some character arcs were lacking: both in cause-and-effect, and resolution. To give credit where it's due, when something big happens, it does affect the character(s) involved. They will cry their hearts out, open their hearts to those close, and find comfort with friends. But... what happens next...? The same thing, then again, and again. It is incredible how these characters do not grow through their experiences, only to fall prey to it again and again without addressing why. One thing I love in other shows like this, is how a character has grown into a stronger person by the end of their ordeal; be it in how they carry themselves, or how they interact with others. But in this show, if you watch the first the first three episodes, and the last 3 episodes, the characters stay mostly the same, save for one... kinda.
In conclusion, Strawberry Panic certainly kept me tuned-in. But not in excitement, but rather how incredulous of an event would have to occur to further these characters. I do think the premise and themes are interesting, but not expanded upon to the extent that would make it inspiring. Not every work needs to have a deep intrigue to it, nor does it have to lean towards such an extreme. But this work fails to dive deep enough to accomplish what I think it wants to do.
