Wanted to start off saying the art is outstanding and consistent, great visual storytelling and made me laugh in some brilliantly composed panels
The theme is something that is rare to be depicted in Japanese media that doesn't have teenage girls as their target audience, and a great portrayal of it at that
But it really felt like much of the story was crammed in because of the low number of chapters to fit it in, if we had more than 1-2 volumes I'm pretty sure it would be a 10 from me
Sometimes the writing is sloppy and much of the dialogue is unrealistic and trope-ish (at least in the english translation)
Reiterating the above, sometimes it just felt like they were just trying to fit in more trauma and conflict to get the readers emotional but I'm pretty sure it's only because they had 7 chapters to deliver the plotlines and backstory
Very good read, nice short story with incredible art