The two-shot had a lot of dead potential. I really liked the lead male. The lead female . . . existed. The idea of the plot was really good. Get rid of the pervy ghost and it might've been good. As it was, I had a kind of disappointed "Ehhhh" feeling while reading it, which is probably why I dropped it after the first chapter, despite how short it was.
Warming: There may have been a near-rape scene with the ghost (which is gross AND weird). I don't know because I "hard nope"d it and skipped a couple pages.
