Story: In terms of the content, its perfectly paced, and the plot is written beautifully to match the shortness of the manga (5 chapters). The story includes a little bit of girly aspects to it, but I can see the feelings of a teenager seeping through and I like that.
Art: The art isn't sloppy this time around, some of the previous works by Ichigo are a bit messy, but this one is really well drawn, with the characteristic unique style she has.
Character: The characters are well written, willing to think outside the box and the interactions between characters aren't always predictable, which for the reader is nice.
Overall, good idea for a plot and well written and drawn manga. Good job!
