Well this story started out pretty well, it was a typical storyline of love and possession but it took some twists and turns that left it interesting enough with some moments that were easily predictable. However where this story takes a wrong turn is at the corny ending. It was laughable not wow-able which was disappointing and it also felt rushed. I think it would have been better with one more chapter to make the ending stronger. Plus, since the story ended so abruptly we don't have a clue what happens to the main characters, does he go to the far away school or not? Do they start dating? You're left clueless with little to no closure.
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