This was a good story even for one chapter. I do honestly wish the story was more than 1. I feel that the story could've been told in 12-24 chapters.
I like how the character reacts and everything. What i don't like is that the character is in a coma and some other stuff. I feel the story could've gone with the boy being in the chicks body and the chick being in the boy's body. The way the story is portrayed by the author makes me think that it could've been really good like that. Having the two of them interact and than maybe falling for each other later. Maybe even have a thing where they switch back between each other. I just really wish this had more. I feel it could've been better if it did.
