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It's a good comic; if it wasn't a good comic, then I wouldn't have read it. (this is my first time reviewing)

There's a lot of positives in the story; it's supposed to be a comedy, gag, fanservice, genderbender, and romance manga that revolves around Shuuichi's friend Iori, who turns into a girl in the most inopportune times. The cause of troubles and trials for Iori came from a fairy, who was then saved by Shuuichi from drowning in the lake. The fairy grants Shuuichi's wish of having a girl childhood friend, but the wish was unexpectedly cast at Iori. The result ... came hilarious scenarios in which Iori would turn into Shiori (the girl version) in the most inconvenient times. The story was comedic, but simple. The art was pretty decent as well. Characters are okay in my opinion. But the plot and the scenarios in which Iori was stuck in made me laugh really hard; in simple, I enjoyed it a lot.

But there is still drawbacks in this manga. After binge reading this whole manga, the concept of Iori turning into Shiori was beaten too much to death in the end. The ending chapters seemed to promise a great ending, but I was disappointed by the way it ended, it just didn't seem right. Shiori acts like a real tsundere, which if you watch and read a lot of anime and manga, it gets tiring real quick. There is also plotholes in the manga, but since this is a comedy, I'll forgive that trespass.

I want to dedicate this paragraph to the big annoyances I have in this manga. First is Miyu's dad: why the heck is he so angry when Miyu brings in a friend that happens to be a boy? The second annoyance is in episode 17 of the manga, they almost crossed the line when it looked like it was harassment for Shiori, which was caused by the boys at the pool. But then again: a lot of manga do cross the line once in a while.

Overall, some of the jokes were cruel, but funny. I would recommend this short manga to anyone as a quick and hilarious comic to read in your spare time.