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These stories are pretty good, although I had a bit of trouble bringing myself to continue reading the first story. I liked the first part and third part of the first story, but the second part was a bit to much for me towards the end. If you don't like shotacon, I'd advise you not to read the first story because the second part has some explicit sex scenes between a small boy and grown man. Other than that, the other stories were a good read.

Chapter 6 Foul na Kankei was a bad read for me. The seme didn't seem sincere enough in his love for the uke, and his attempt to make it up to him was certainly not enough in my opinion. Rape is a serious issue, but both the seme and uke seem to undermine it in the story, and that gave off a very unsatisfying feeling when I finished the story. The uke was right in saying that the seme chose to sacrifice their friendship for his self-interest, and the story could have been developed along the lines of the uke's struggle to forgive but that ... was tackled pretty badly with a cliched revelation of love. Overall, it has a good storyline, but bad development. I'll encourage people to skip this chapter.

The other stories were nice though; Yamato Nase's usual style makes it really cute and enjoyable to read. Even the shota part was cute. These stories were what made me give an overall rating of 7 instead of the 6 or less induced by Foul na Kankei.