This is a nice little short, if you are just looking for a really quick read. There isn't any huge development in character or story, even though this one-shot has the potential to be a great story. Which is disappointing that Mayu didn't take it any father. The ending is predictable and with the little bit of character depth you do learn makes the ending that much MORE obvious.
It is a cute short work. But the story can't even live up to the the amazing artwork that is Mayu's. If you are looking for something to pass the a little time then this would do the job. If this we longer or had a squeal that builds on it, that would be the only way I would strongly suggest reading that. But since that isn't the case I would say that it's not worth it, which is really disappointing. read more