Aug 9, 2024
As it stands right now "Is It Alright for My Multiverse Self to Fall in Love?" only has a oneshot (thought I do believe it's going to be serialized), so I will be reviewing that on it's own. I think it definitely has potential, but it's hard to judge how the future will be for this series given the unique concept.
First, The Concept: I've made a lot of jokes about selfcest, and I think they'll only increase as the story goes on. But moving away from that, it's a solid idea. "I saved a girl I had a crush on and she saves me
...
in return, except it wasn't her" sounds quite fun to me. I've always been kinda a science fiction nerd so in case they ever explore possible time traveling shenanigans, I won't complain, as long as it adds to the story in a unique way. I'm gonna make one prediction, multiverse Miyato is gonna have to go back to where they came from at the end and it's gonna be a VERY bittersweet ending.
Second, The Art: It's definitely good. The expressions are extremely well done, and I like the character designs. There obviously hasn't been too much to see so far, but I like it. The art seems like someone experienced made it (I can't find any other work by the artist, so they may or may not have experience). But since I gotta be honest, there has been a couple iffy panels in the oneshot. There's not many, it's just a few, but if you look long enough on some, you may find inconsistencies in the art.
Third, The Characters: I'll keep this short, we don't know much about them. Jogo comes off as a bit indecisive, maybe a bit of a compulsive liar at some times, but he's not a bad guy. He's good hearted and hasn't done anything wrong so far. Miyato (our miyato) is pretty average, but is open with her feelings, it seems. When Jogo asks her out, she declines, saying it's too sudden, but they get closer with each other. Miyato (multiverse) is well, also pretty average, but she's more unique. She is more outgoing, more cheerful, and teases MC quite a lot. All three characters need more depth and characterization, but I'll give a lot of leeway considering it is a oneshot.
Would I recommend it? Yeah, it's a oneshot. If you got like 10 minutes, go read it.
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
What did you think of this review?
Nice
0
Love it
0
Funny
0
Confusing
0
Well-written
0
Creative
0Show all