Mitsuba no Monogatari: Noroi Shoujo to Shi no Rondo
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Well where do i start

let me preface this and say that at least the premise is intresting and somewhat fresh for an isekai nowadays that is and as such i gave it a 5, but the pace is too fast, fron the start something doesnt fit right and the plot feels off, things keep happening one after the other

The only thing i can think off is maybe the author was like "how do i make an Edgy MC and what is the most shocking thing ?" and just went ham without trying to connect or build the world.

The first chp should have happened in like ... 5-10 chps, he should have built the world, built the hate, showed her being crazy or more like non caring, then start the her story.

Which brings me to another point, her being bored is not a the premise, it's just a fucking excuse to put any random scenario in, so we have same problem as usual with every low effort isekai, things happens just because they need to happen.

You know you can try to compare it to it's closest competitor Tanya but at least that story had world building, it had a decent plot, amazing fights, it was paced correctly, and Tanyas decisions as a character were logical, this story on the other hand is all over the place.

3 chps in and i dont recommend it, the only good thing is the art that is pretty decent and the only merit to this manga, nothing else is as good.