Mar 30, 2010
Um, ok, this series contains 3 one-shots, so I will be reviewing the first 2 briefly and the last 9-chapter one-shot in more detail.
[Radical Logical First Time]
Overall:6
Dialogue heavy, reminds me a bit of Futari Ecchi, the couple. As the title suggests, soem of the content IS very logical, almost educational. Plus the flow of the story isn't so smooth as a result of the heavy dialogue and reasoning. But, it is one-of-a-kind, for it being so logical yet radical. Lol. Can skip this if you feel burdened by the dialogue.
[Cute Delinquent Kaname]
Overall:7
This one-shot is abt a delinquent (as the title suggests, lmao) doing ecchi stuff
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with someone she likes. The strong point is the difference between her usual self and when she is with him. Therefore, pretty unique, the art will be a part to look out for, and as such, some scenes have a lot of impact.
[Isn’t It Nice Being Just a Little Nasty?]
Story:7
Well, this one-shot started off with an "aftermath", before starting how it all started, which was good, since the start was a little dry. But after a the dry scenes there was a lot of sexual content till the end. Unfortunately, I do think that there was a bit too much of that.
I like the comedy in this one-shot, and especially until the parts where the first and second girls started fighting for the guy. Cos after that point character development was much less, and from then on became a normal harem manga. IMO, there could be more emotions shown thru the harem than just obsessive sexual desires, which made the one-shot dull later on.
This one-shot is unique, like the other 2, for its cast of characters and good jokes, puns, and lots of different genres mixed together.
Art:9
Clear art, shades and shadows were included, some pages were in colour, vivid expressions.
Especially commendable are the speech bubbles included with inverted "tails", which made more sense which character is sayign the things in the speech bubbles.
Character:8
Interesting character mix but somehow lacks character development. Special characteristics were enhanced in some parts of the one-shot like a Tsundere student council president using her powers, an erotic teacher stealing something from the staff room and an otaku identifying anime stuff.
Each character was distinguished quite clearly in some parts, but not enough. The male character does not have much special characteristics.
Enjoyment:8
Comedy is great, along with ecchi and story progression. Although some parts look unrealistic and some confusing, it's still one great one-shot.
Overall:7
Interesting... but looks more of a typical harem towards the end, albeit with much comedy and special characteristics.
PS.Comments for art is for whole series.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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