Aug 12, 2024
Grand Dwarf has an interesting enough premise that is absolutely wasted by the author's apparent inability to write a compelling story to save their life.
Our MC is a 70 early old craftsman who is a master of his work, whatever that is. He's some kinda metal worker that runs his own shop, but the author never elaborates on exactly what services this shop provides or what work is actually done there. He dies from a heart attack, is reincarnated in a high fantasy world in a young body, and quickly finds that his whole workshop and all its tools were conveniently transported with him.
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He also has an eye that grants him very convenient super powers for a craftsman like analyzing the properties of different materials.
It doesn't take long for our MC to meet a native adventurer of this world who is adventuring alone after being betrayed by her party. He quickly enters into a sorta arrangement with her where he'll craft her equipment to use to defeat the demon lord, and after only a few days, crafts her an extremely powerful sci-fi sorta laser gun that uses her mana for ammunition.
This gun is incredibly OP and one-shot monsters that are hyped up to be something incredibly scary and formidable. It can also be used to immediately heal anyone of any injury short of death. The next eight chapters I read are literally just our heroes one-shoting all of their problems away and effortlessly gaining tons of fame, recognition and riches along the way.
I don't know how anyone can maintain interest in this story beyond what I've read, but it's gone on for 33 chapters as of the writing of this review, so clearly it appeals to SOMEONE. If you love stories that provide nothing but effortless wish fulfillment then this story is for you. For everyone else: don't give this manga even a second of your time.
Manga does get points for having nice art, including some beautiful landscapes and appealing character designs, but that's it. That is all the nice things I have to say about it.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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