Mar 1, 2024
6.1/10
This is a very premature review, and I will edit or make a new review when this manga has more chapters, but I don’t want to lose my opinions right now. Anyway, for the actual review:
The plot of this manga just jumps all over the place — this is heavily due to the piss poor introduction into the story that doesn’t get elaborated in the later or preceding chapters in a natural way. As an example of this, each chapter is seemingly loaded with flashbacks to create character exposition and explanations, but the story starts a flashback before an event is fully explained, leaving
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behind many loose ends.
This also influences the characters in quite a dramatic manner, since all you know in 3 hefty chapters is that the mc is from another world — though not emphasized or explained besides for a line or two — and everyone woman in existence loves him. This perfectly encapsulates the plot and characters, since they are just inserted and spoon-fed to the audience to simp over.
A very mediocre start to an erotica, and whether this will change for the better is hard to say, but I still have some hopes.
Chapter 5: Pretty bad and forgettable.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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