Aug 14, 2024
The usual. Starts strong. Around 20-30 really good chapters with slow but actual progress and enjoyable characters and events. As soon as out of ideas/editor calls -> Female lead willingly (fully out of character) goes along with forced HEAVY! NTR-bait to get the outcome everyone wanted.
I genuinely thought this was not Shoujo and I could not find anything on if it is but seems like it wants to be? And the worst kind at that?
Not like the author set up a million other and better ways to get there! It had to be the easy way out, the most formulaic writing, even if
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cheapest and weakest. Fuck my life. And the whole rest of the manga is soured.
Chapters 40+43 are an insult to the readers. I thought due to how the past 38 chapters went and how the cast is set up and established, that the way to dating would be.. different. Nah. Full stop, she is completely changed in chapter 40, turns into the worst type of writing a damsel in distress and lets the hottie manhandle her Andrew Tate style (sadly not exaggerated).
Embarrassing. Now, again, as per usual with THIS kind of Shoujo one needs to ask for the whole remainder of the series "will she let herself be swept away again when another hottie pursues her?" "Is her love genuine?" (I honestly think not) "She was even ready to leave with hottie again ch43 p8 last panel" "Why did she let this all happen/want it?".
These are actual questions I would loooove to ask the author. But they won't be able to answer any of them. They did this shit for the sake of doing it. That fact alone makes this trash to me.
Do you enjoy reading along for tens of chapters, get to learn about established characters and relationships to then randomly with zero setup and writing be kicked in the balls? This is your cup of tea. Get that bread. Even if it now is full of holes and starting to spoil.
You want your main couple to be consistent to the very end and to have actual development involving dramatic events (NOT cheap forced NTR-bait) or just any writing at all to make something very important happen then do not waste your time. I am dropping this as of chapter 43, it just can not ever be redeemed. The damage is done and major at that.
I need to be honest, it was so out there that I did have a laugh even these chapters but what happens just is so utterly stupid and unenjoyable, I can not wholeheartedly recommend this to anyone.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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