Oct 7, 2023
5.6/10
Minor Plot spoilers
How I have not reviewed this before is beyond me, so here goes a review dug from my memory 5–6 months ago:
This is one of the most ridiculous piece of inconsistent regression garbage I’ve read.
The author decides on a plot point, but changes it later on in the story. The most ridiculous thing about it was how the author initially emphasizing that the mc’s fate can not be changed as events will still happen, which defeats the entire premise of a regression. However, I guess the author decided that it was stupid, so the mc somehow changed his fate. Don’t worry, it gets
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more ridiculous as it expends the cliché tropes of an overpowered sibling + other characters with untapped potential.
I can get over that, but where I decided to finally draw a line was the lack of mc’s power balance, and the kid supporting cast. The mc is depicted as overpowered in one scene, but then his kid friends, whom he just taught, caught up to him/is on par. The hyper-fixation on the side characters really takes away from the thrill that the mc should be supplying in a regression story.
The only good thing about this is the art, everything else is just average or painfully bad.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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