Mar 17, 2024
This story started off really interesting however you can immidiately see how by chapter 3-4 the manhwa author keeps cutting important things, doesn't properly introduce characters, the level up scenario is just "You leveled up" - "Sponsored an new abiltiy" and we don't see his status window much, if anything by chapter 82 we have probably seen it like 2-3 times in total and then the first time we see it is past like 20 chapter when he wakes up after a big fight, which is his first time actually fighting someone he wasn't able to easily beat.
The status points has over 100 on
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two different stats yet he is like lvl 50 and then when we see the status window again a couple chapters later his status went down...uh what? Not to mention the fights...what fights??? A lot of them cut cut out and it just shows that he won or that he fought. It's not bad to cut out fights where an MC won against a nobody but why even bother bringing them up if it doesn't contribute to the game we just get the MC saying that they had due after duel after duel when he is supposedly on a "Tight schedule because a cataclysm is going to soon happen and he has soo much to do" yet he is out here fighting nobodies which doesn't level him up or contribute to his status or skills not to mention a guy saved his life when Athena was going to kill him "AGAIN" and he doesn't even worry or care about paying that guy back when that guy desperately asked him to come to his country and help him with the red stones. The MC doesn't really have a personality and sometimes act like he is stupid and oblivious when he isn't just because he doesn't care about explaining things, even to his two most "trusted" people the guy who trained him and the woman who likes him. He doesn't tell them the full story about things which could easily be cut out of the story if the author wants us to be in "Suspense or curious" but instead the MC doesn't explain things. Not to mention there is a Merlin character and the Athena chick who tried to kill him in CH 1 they look the same and it's confusing especially since the story doesn't explain if they are the same person or different. They introduce Athena as an evil woman he wants to kill but when he sees her again he acts like nothing and doesn't have ill feelings towards her then when merlin is shown he is being all buddy buddy with her so if she is Athena one of the 12 he swore he would kill that just defeats the purpose of him going back to "stop them"
Oh and then there are the CONSTANT scene cuts, picture a horribly edited movie with sooooo many cut scenes from one scenario to another. They cut some minor things at first which was fine until by season 2 & 3 it was soooo much to the point where you are left wonder what happened, why didn't they just show that, I wanted to see that, what?? In some cases they show useless things instead of what happened.
By season 3 we keep hearing him say "I have gotten much stronger" but yet he couldn't beat Arthur and passed out after just one hit... not to mention he keeps saying the cataclysm is gong to happen very soon yet it has been how long now and it still hasn't happened.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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