Jul 27, 2023
The NTR hurt with this one, it started pretty good and I thought it was going to be a masterpiece that leaves you wanting more but instead I had to drop during chapter 4. The ML realizes he has feelings for the MC (it seems like love) and instead of being honest and telling him he straight up runs away and then BOOM time skip out of no where like we didn't even see it coming it's just BAM it's been 4 years, where they haven't spoken or seen each other. Now the ML is a prostitute selling himself to old men for money and
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then he bumps into the MC as he is checking in a hotel to see his next job and texts the MC to come see him after he has had sex, the MC goes to the hotel where the ML LITERALLY just had sex with the old guy and he didn't even wash up...ugh I had to drop it after that. It had a scene where they were in high school and he had just had sex with someone else and came to the MC house to wash up because he said he was covered in cum down there, I should have just dropped it there but kept reading because of how beautiful the art is but that time skip and NTR just made it hard to keep reading. Honestly trash that could have been really good. The author could have made it more about them in high school and how they both finally fall in love and find a reason to go on and enjoy life, it also never resolved the issue that the MC had with their old school and we didn't even get to see why exactly he had to change schools. It was just left unanswered especially after they both got jumped (separately) and it sounded like they were going to keep fighting and jumping the people at the MC's new school then out of nowhere they quickly graduate and then another time skip. This story was just not written well.
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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