Mar 26, 2024
The age gap is crazy, I knew there was one but I was expecting it to be somewhere between 8-12 years max not a full 20 years.
The MC is just fresh out of high school and barely starting college meanwhile the ML is 38 years. A 20 year age gap is crazy and way too much even for a fictional world, the MC is still basically a child since he is barely 18/19
That aside the art style looked nice in the cover however it isn't in the story it's an average 5, nothing special but could be better.
The MC's personality right off the start isn't
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a lovable one and his rich mom isn't lovable either.
The MC has this idol who used to be a bad boy who beat up a group of 100 people at once and was nice to children, and he wanted to be just like him, but because he needed money since his mom told him to get a job and she could hook him up with a job at a bar where her friend owns the place, he starts working there and turns out its the ML who is 38 and the idol the MC had, however the MC knows and he doesn't like the "old man"
I dropped it after it said the ML's age and how the MC knew it was his idol. They could have easily made the ML a 21-24 year old if they wanted an age gap but instead did a whole 20 years age gap.
Reviewer’s Rating: 2
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