Jan 12, 2023
Warning spoilers all over
I came for the smut & I know it's just fiction but I really did not expect myself to be so pissed with the plot & the 2 main characters.. Probably one of the worst shoujo smut I've ever read...
In what world a man is this fucking dense as an erotic novelist?! Like I'd expect a writer to be at least intelligible and know what they're doing but to be this clueless & not knowing the effect he's doing to the female lead & not sorry about it is just so unreal to me.
It had so much potential for a plot about
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a housekeeper & a novelist living in the same house, I'm no story writer but I can think of a few ways of how to make 2 characters develop romantic feelings for each other & not just cluelessly sexually harassing the female lead... & how fucking annoying every time his face turns to this literal emoji 😲 when she pushes him to back tf up after touching her without consent. Somehow she fell in love with him after all that harassment & her reasoning of falling for him because of how he called out her name??!! BFFR 💀💀💀💀💀
It angers me how they could've just done this simple thing called AN ACTUAL COMMUNICATION. The bar is set real low...
The way this mangaka keeps """"teasing"""" us readers thinking we'd get a sex scene when in actuality he just cluelessly harasses her just for references for his novel & when we finally get to the real deal it's so underwhelming like it's just not worth it after all that harassment I don't even wanna see them having sex
The art style is really appealing & that's the only nice thing I'll say about this manga. It's really disappointing how the art is wasted on this god-awful manga.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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