the story is next to non existent,
the art does everything it has to to be good but nothing more
the characters are around for so little i wondered am i even surprise to care about them.
i am looking at this as a oneshot. and as a oneshot this is a complete failure.
its only about as long as a normal manga chapter, considering most oneshots are around 40 pages, some significantly more, some a bit less, but they are self contained stories. this one ends as fast as it begins. its like some guy was SO confident that it would be a manga he didn't even think
more had to be done.
and also as a manga this would have failed. its overly generic and doesn't have the spark that makes other generic things live.
the only reason that i gave this a 5 is because it had a mildly amusing joke, and its not that long of a read.