Jan 2, 2024
4.8/10
Congrats! A doujinshi author/artist made a manga — an erotica of course. As expected, the only bright side this manga has is the art, since everything else — plot & characters — are all brain dead.
I usually address the plot first in my reviews, but the characters have truly resounded within me… in a bad way. Like holy shit, these are some of the worst written characters I have ever seen, since every single one of their thoughts/choices are so unnatural and forced that it becomes absolutely ridiculous. To add to that, all of the side characters are all “the weird kids” you’d find in
...
a public school, but those characters are the norm in this mess of a manga.
Sexualization of a classmate literally a foot away from you who can clearly hear your conversation? People buying a subscription/watching borderline pornography of a minor with pride? Oh dear God, make it end.
As for the plot of this shit-fest, it’s all unnatural — character that shows up at EXACTLY the right time to add drama or get the plot moving? Oh, how profound and natural that introduction and plot development was!
This is as hollow and shallow as an erotica can get without it becoming too annoying to read. Think of a storyline that only a hentai writer could make and you have whatever the fuck this manga is. But hey, the art is good at least!
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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