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| THIS IS AN MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER. ---------------------------------------- It was alright for a oneshot but I had expected alot more in the story. Oh well. |
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Darkreaper70 said: It was alright for a oneshot but I had expected alot more in the story. Oh well. Same here, the way he stopped them happened too fast... |
| Really? I thoroughly enjoyed the one-shot. I actually can see some potential from the world Murarta Yuusuke created here. Although Park seems like your typical shounen kid, the fact that he's a window washer could set a rather interesting premise for an interesting comedy story. *Shrugs.* Either way, not too bad. 7/10. |
| I didn't think it was too bad and I love his work so it was nice to see Murata's art in something other than Eyeshield. |
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Darkreaper70 said: THIS IS AN MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER. ---------------------------------------- It was alright for a oneshot but I had expected alot more in the story. Oh well. |
| I thought it was alright. I think it had some potential - the setting was different and the main character, although a sterotypical shounen boy, had an interesting. I think maybe if it was a little more than a one-shot it would have been pretty good. |
| 7/10 for me. and too short. only 35 pages? i like the way Park jumping and jumping. xD |
"Perhaps the distant part of the sky always seems clearest, so that we will always strive to reach it."  chiquit |
| Nice and short. Loved it. Art style is fun. Makes me want to read Eyeshield. |
| It was ok. |
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Reversify said: It was ok. i agree! ^__^ |
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| Besides the art, this was really lame. The MC was an annoying little shit though...I didn't like him one bit. |
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| This is a great study of perspective. The story itself was good, not great. But it did its work well. I wish this could have turned into a series. Park's adventure in his work to give support to his grandfather was thrilling. Mrs. Police officer Himuro made my heart skip a beat. I wonder if this one shot got rejected... :/ |
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