| Well some people asked and I like some compulsive pervert couldn't control ones self. Understand this was written at a late time during the night (im tired) and it is merely a set up, this story is also a slow burner. Basically in this intro Ive set the current scene and the intro to our first two characters, as requested. I didn't want to introduce anyone else yet because im going to work on a different system. Simple, if you wish to be written into the story, request it here and add a little bio on what exactly you want to be like/do and I will then change it or stick to it but write you into the story. That way the story doesn't get too crowded or anybody unhappy with their portrayal ...until the shipping kicks in *cough, cough* Here is the initial setup, sorry for any odd mistakes *wipes eyes* im tired. Current characters: Lupadim JD Lime_ Jackrabb1t Korrvo Heredity UnoPuntoCinco Kousoku11 PART 1: PART 2: Part 3: Part 4: Part 5: Part 6: Part 7: Part 8: |
SpooksApr 26, 2014 8:05 PM
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| +1 Nice potential, I like the imagery, would suscribe to this newsletter. |
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Heredity said: i can't wait until we have paragraphs about secretions in great detail. op will deliver. Sounds like you want in on this lupadim said: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEW y delete ur postss |
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Heredity said: That won't happen because it seems the OP is trying to follow the user's true personalityi can't wait until we have paragraphs about secretions in great detail. op will deliver. And as I am not homo JD will be really sad |
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| we want lemon, we want lemon NOW. nice intro btw, leaves room for a fine ass romance later on. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
Heredity said: i can't wait until we have paragraphs about secretions in great detail. op will deliver. first comes reluctant caressing *squee* lupadim said: That won't happen because it seems the OP is trying to follow the user's true personality And as I am not homo JD will be really sad Im so sorry Lupa-Kun! >_<; I really am but I-I can't control myself when I start thinking or writing BL I become such a perverted girl ;___; |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: DON'T YOU DARE MAL SHIPPERHeredity said: i can't wait until we have paragraphs about secretions in great detail. op will deliver. first comes reluctant caressing *squee* lupadim said: That won't happen because it seems the OP is trying to follow the user's true personality And as I am not homo JD will be really sad Im so sorry Lupa-Kun! >_<; I really am but I-I can't control myself when I start thinking or writing BL I become such a perverted girl ;___; |
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| Can't wait for the slash pages and whatnot |
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| Let me just say that I am desperate to not become a character in this particular fanfiction... |
Sapewloth said: and it better not be softcorewe want lemon, we want lemon NOW. |
Jackrabb1t said: Let me just say that I am desperate to become a character in this particular fanfiction... fixed that for ya ;) Im working on the next part, it is taking some time due to getting the plot moving naturally and not forcing immediate sexual tensions. The better the build up, the better the pay off my friends. |
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| YOU BETTER NOT EVEN THINK AT IT MAL SHIPPER Why can't you ship me with a female? Of all the people... JD... urgh |
lupadimMar 30, 2014 7:25 AM
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lupadim said: Why can't you ship me with a female? Because everyone knows this |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| my fanart of lupa and JD http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg feel free to start fangirling |
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kami_desu said: my fanart of lupa and JD http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg feel free to start fangirling Oh muh gawd....YES O__O Suddenly im inspired. you must do more as the story goes on plz |
SpooksMar 30, 2014 10:58 AM
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| Part 2 is ready, more set up and more characters introduced. Remember if you want in, request it here. I would also like opinions on which mod shall play a villain coming up, help me decide. Here is part 2: The shouting match had been going for a good hour or so and the sun had begun to set. More and more users went back to their homes, back offline the town was quiet and the fireflies had begun to flutter about the square, with the fountains lighting a fitting centre piece. The argument of meat murder had somehow turned into a debate on human philosophy and religious ethics (like always) had left only Lupa and the other user nearly passed out from shared STD (Stressful thread discussions) "And another thing-" Lupa continued through strained voice and tired eyes, poking the user in the chest. "Ok come on man, you've made you point like several times now, we gotta find a place to stay tonight" mumbled JD who had been casually observing from a deck chair he had procured, sipping through a fancy straw a rather flamboyant drink made of pink and green. He arose from the chair stepping over to the two users now just glaring at each other, neither willing to back down. "come on" JD whispered slowly grabbing Lupadim by both shoulders, at that moment JD realized the two had never really connected physically. He remembers rough housing when they were both young users still getting used to casual but it had been years since then. He had seen Lupa grow into his own man, strong and determined if a little confrontational but he didn't mind. For as long as he could remember he had been there to step up and help him, JD and Lupa were inseparable the user folk used to say. To now feel the warmth of his skin under his palms, something felt different like before they had only really seen each other through a screen. To touch another is to feel reality. Regardless of this strange feeling he quickly let go of Lupa as he had turned his head to face him, tired eyed "yeah you're right let's get going" he rose from his crouched position and began to walk off, half way down the road he turned and spoke loud enough so the user could hear him "I'm pretty sure that guy saw the error of his ways, I was defiantly right there what a closed minded person he was" From far behind the faint echo of a loud voice rose up "what the fuck!!!" From behind an old barrel a pair of eyes peered out, watching the two move away. It was hungrily staring as if just devouring the very sight of them. This shadowy figure walked out, bathed in moonlight. Hidden by a hood the stranger grinned a wide, fiendish grin. Licking his lips the stranger spoke in excited words "Such amazing beauties, oh how I wish, no need to see this play out. God I hope this gets erotic enough for my taste" Sneaking slowly towards the two, following the trail. A tall man, a manly man was standing just shy of the stranger, watching it with a confused stare. The stranger in a crouched position slinked past him, stopping for a moment and peering out from the hood..."hum?" "...ok what are you supposed to be?" he quized "just an observer....an observer." replied the stranger, licking his lips eyes blood red. "Well you're looking kinda crazy right now man" told the larger man, questioning why he even started this convosation. "an observer..." whispered the stranger, getting closer to the man "an observer of...." it was if he couldn't contain his excitement. "hey now, not so close" the guy backed up to the wall of the building "an observer of....BOY LOVE!!! such erotic man on man action!!" the stranger had burst forth from their cloak to reveal a silver haired user, with an excited face only a secret pervert could know. "Hey man I said I didn't want to be in this story!!" Yelled the tall man breaking the forth wall, the man was known in town as Jackrabb1t the new local blacksmith. The small silver haired stranger was already rubbing his head (not that one you perverts) up and down Jacks shirt front "Can you smell it, it's the smell of Yaoi waiting to happen, such romance such erotic guy on guy!" laughing manically the stranger was all over the place, Jack yelled out "Calm the fuck down man!" pushing the stranger away. "Huh? what was that noise?" JD quizzed turning back to the ally to see who was there. They had found a local thread that would still accept them this late for a place to stay. "Probably some newbies making a ruckus" Lupa replied "come on let's get in, we wouldn't want to be sharing a room now and I need at least a king sized bed in my room, so come on before they are all gone" he pushed open the thread door and walked in, JD took one last look at the ally, he could have sworn he heard posts. He shook his head and entered. Behind a stack of crates Jack had the stranger held, hand over his mouth "jesus man do you have any idea how weird it would have been had those guys seen us together, you spouting that shit. People will start talking!" "mumf murrmf" mumbled the stranger, Jack released his hand "Almost as strange as two guys in an ally together, one holding the other close, hand caressing his face?" Jack looked down, indeed it did seem like some beginning to a cheesy Yaoi fiction. "Hey now!" he yelled launching the stranger away "ok man start talking, who the hell are you and why were you following those two guys over there?" The stranger got up, placing the hood over their head again "My name is Lime_ and I'm following budding romance". ~~ Next part promising something hawt. I'll admit this is more fun that I thought it would be, im taking it slow but more characters and developments are happening. If I force anything it will break character and feel hollow. I have already got a good romance scene down, just waiting for the right moment to unleash it. I'll also admit Lime and Jacks characters came out of nowhere but they are two I find really exciting, I have such plans.... Random head cannon: Lupa and JD are both blondes and Lupa is taller than JD, what I imagine something liek this: http://images5.fanpop.com/image/answers/2516000/2516901_1331946626836.21res_500_375.jpg Lime_ is short with silver hair, rather young looking whilst Jack is tall dark and handsome, the tough but can't help but save you kinda guy: http://images5.fanpop.com/image/articles/147000/yaoi_147328_top.jpg?cache=1329873573 |
SpooksMar 30, 2014 11:31 AM
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| This is waaay too much fun lol Double combo yaoi next chapter with Lime_/Jack' and Lupa/JD, plz ! Also, Kibura_Iburasa said: kami_desu said: my fanart of lupa and JD http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg feel free to start fangirling Oh muh gawd....YES O__O Suddenly im inspired. you must do more as the story goes on plz Thx so much kami_ for the delicious fanart ! I'd be glad to bring my contribution for the lemon scenes *fangirling hard* |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| I won't even bother reading it anymore |
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| i could fap to this |
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lupadim said: I won't even bother reading it anymore Come on, you know you're gonna check every new chapter just so you can facedesk more. You will might even grow to like it, eventually. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| some serious fap worthy material here |
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lupadim said: I won't even bother reading it anymore Oh man, the rustles are deafening kibura said: "just an observer....an observer." replied the stranger, licking his lips eyes blood red. H-h-ow exactly do you see me??! ((suscribed to this newsletter)) |
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Lime_ said: H-h-ow exactly do you see me??! ((suscribed to this newsletter)) You have sliver hair and red coloured iris, its totes kawaii. ^_^ UnoPuntoCinco said: some serious fap worthy material here oh please...they haven't even stripped off their shirts yet ;) |
SpooksMar 30, 2014 1:10 PM
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lupadim said: Why can't you ship me with a female? I can think of a few reasons: 1) This is loosely based on your story, therefore the protagonists should be the same. 2) No females have volunteered yet. And I'd imagine that even if they did, the author would manage to make it gay regardless. See below. Alternatively, I'll just create a yuri equivalent and genderbend male participants if any 3) Because fujoshi and their kindred know no bounds in their quest for BL content. I mean, it's been around three days since you made your story and there's already two chapters and a drawn picture. It's impressive in a way. |
Kousoku11Mar 30, 2014 2:30 PM
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Kibura_Iburasa said: UnoPuntoCinco said: some serious fap worthy material here oh please...they haven't even stripped off their shirts yet ;) But... that foreshadowing was intense |
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Kousoku11 said: lupadim said: Why can't you ship me with a female? I can think of a few reasons: 1) This is loosely based on your story, therefore the protagonists should be the same. 2) No females have volunteered yet. And I'd imagine that even if they did, the author would manage to make it gay regardless. See below. Alternatively, I'll just create a yuri equivalent and genderbent male participants if any 3) Because fujoshi and their kindred know no bounds in their quest for BL content. I mean, it's been around three days since you made your story and there's already two chapters and a drawn picture. It's impressive in a way. You are indeed knowledgeable, you might be next on the list of introduced character. Couldn't have a story like this without Kousoku-kun in it <3 all my love. |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: You are indeed knowledgeable, you might be next on the list of introduced character. Couldn't have a story like this without Kousoku-kun in it <3 all my love. I thought you'd never a- Sure, I don't mind. I'm actually rather curious to find out how I'll be portrayed. I'm sure that you can think of someone appropriate for this fictional version of mine... |
Kousoku11Mar 30, 2014 3:29 PM
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| HAHAHA KOUSOKU As you opened your big mouth you are going to be gay HAH. I am still depressed. Why did I even get tired with discussing? I never get tired. Unrealistic as fuck |
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lupadim said: HAHAHA KOUSOKU As you opened your big mouth you are going to be gay HAH. Lewd as fuck |
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lupadim said: HAHAHA KOUSOKU As you opened your big mouth you are going to be gay. HAH. Well, I don't exactly have a problem with it, because: 1) I don't feel like I'm personally being portrayed here, so it doesn't matter if stuff like that happens. 2) I'm bicurious regardless. This term isn't entirely accurate in my case, but I don't feel like announcing the specifics here, so I'll stick with the simplified version. |
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Kousoku11 said: why so maturelupadim said: HAHAHA KOUSOKU As you opened your big mouth you are going to be gay. HAH. Well, I don't exactly have a problem with it, because: 1) I don't feel like I'm personally being portrayed here, so it doesn't matter if stuff like that happens. 2) I'm bicurious regardless. This term isn't entirely accurate in my case, but I don't feel like announcing the specifics here, so I'll stick with the simplified version. |
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Kousoku11 said: I thought you'd never a- Sure, I don't mind. I'm actually rather curious to find out how I'll be portrayed. I'm sure that you can think of someone appropriate for this fictional version of mine... Usually I would just pair you with myself ;) but seen as im not in this story I'll have to work something out. I promise not to get jealous </3 |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: BUT, ain't you female? He is male. NOT FAIRKousoku11 said: I thought you'd never a- Sure, I don't mind. I'm actually rather curious to find out how I'll be portrayed. I'm sure that you can think of someone appropriate for this fictional version of mine... Usually I would just pair you with myself ;) but seen as im not in this story I'll have to work something out. I promise not to get jealous </3 And I'm starting to think I am silly for thinking you are a girl |
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| Part thruuu....(3) The room was cramped, the bed to the side. Across the room a large bay window looking out over the town. The moon which hung over casual section was indeed bright, it was caressing the town with a silver glow and it was almost like time had stood still during the night. For all its commotion during the day, the night belongs to relaxing, to see friends sitting at the local late night tavern, sharing dumb stories and laughing about the latest news from the office of current events. "It's rather...cramped." JD said, looking around the room "well I get the left side!" he yelled, throwing a large bag of supplies to the floor and leaping onto the bed, before simultaneously getting bounced off it again by the springs and landing head first into the wooden floor. "Cramped?" grumbled Lupa "It only has one bed for Christ sake!" he yelled "How the hell are we supposed to sleep tonight like this?!" yelling he kicked away the bag "I'm going down to complain" he turned to leave "Wait, don't!" JD was crouched on all fours on the bed facing Lupadim, turning with a confused look "I mean...well" he didn't know what he meant but for some reason the idea of having to share a bed didn't repulse him at all. In fact he always felt safer with Lupadim near him. "I mean no point complaining, you will get use thrown out of the thread again and I don't want to spend the night wandering aimlessly from thread to thread" JD's eyes pleaded, even Lupadim could see the exhaustion in them, they had been travelling for a long time, he felt a tinge of guilt, he didn't like the idea of upsetting him. He just wanted to keep his friend safe, even through all this. "fine...whatever, just pick a side and go to sleep" he tried to make it sound casual, throwing in a smile and a soft head shake like giving in to a spoilt child. It took moments for JD to undress and leap back under the covers. "man this is so gay." Lupa mumbled to himself, face palming. Slowly he began to remove the shoulder armour he was wearing, he needed the strongest armour to protect him whenever he fought in heated battles or flame wars. He could feel the weight fall off of him, suddenly he was barely clothed. If anything he felt he needed to have a hot shower but that would have to wait. This tavern thread was small and lacked many luxuries. He stood looking out at the moonlit sky and the town before him, wearing little more than loose fitting pants, shirtless the scars of previous battles stood out against the flesh of his upper body and the moonlight. He smiled to himself "you know I-" he turned to see JD had already not only picked a side but had already fallen asleep. Lupa smiled again, the journey was tough on both of them, sometimes he would forget that. He lowered himself onto the bed as quietly as possible not to disturb his friend. Deciding to remain above the covers and as close to the other edge as possible, he began to drift off too. He suddenly felt something weird on his side, opening his eyes and looking down, it was JD who had scooted up to his side and snuggled down just under his arm. Lupa immediately nearly choked, nearly falling off the bed. Eyes wide he began to sweat, the words NOPE repeating over and over in his mind but he was too tired to do anything about it. As long as nobody walked in and mistook the situation he guessed it would be alright. Slowly he too drifted off to sleep, right next to him. Meanwhile down below in the street voice could be heard "higher! I can't see them!" it was Lime_ Repeatedly the small figure was been thrown into the air, trying desperately to get a look through the taverns windows and catch a glimpse at possible BL in action. Below Jack was stood ready to catch him before launching him into the air again "Why the hell am I helping you again you little brat?!" he yelled to him. "Shhh!! because if you don't I'm going to tell the towns mods you sexual harassed my in private messages!" Lime_ whisper yelled back "Damn it, I really gotta stop talking to strangers" Jack sighed before launching Lime_ up in the air again. "and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said as he went up in the air again "wait WHAT!" Jack yelled back. Indeed even at night Casual is never dull. |
SpooksMar 31, 2014 10:18 AM
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| NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy |
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lupadim said: NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy I had your name saved on my spell check, for some reason its gone and reverted. I'll fix that don't you worry ;) Next I will introduce at least 4 new characters. |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOlupadim said: NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy I had your name saved on my spell check, for some reason its gone and reverted. I'll fix that don't you worry ;) |
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lupadim said: Kibura_Iburasa said: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOlupadim said: NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy I had your name saved on my spell check, for some reason its gone and reverted. I'll fix that don't you worry ;) you have to be happy that I gave you hot abs and cool scars though? |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: Well, sure. But it seems I have no fedora in your story so that is a huge -1lupadim said: Kibura_Iburasa said: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOlupadim said: NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy I had your name saved on my spell check, for some reason its gone and reverted. I'll fix that don't you worry ;) you have to be happy that I gave you hot abs and cool scars though? |
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lupadim said: Well, sure. But it seems I have no fedora in your story so that is a huge -1 Thats like complaining that Link doesn't have the master sword at the beginning of the game ;) |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: A valid complaintlupadim said: Well, sure. But it seems I have no fedora in your story so that is a huge -1 Thats like complaining that Link doesn't have the master sword at the beginning of the game ;) |
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Kibura said: and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O kami_desu said: my fanart of lupa and JD http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg feel free to start fangirling ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^ the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out |
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Lime_ said: With 4 new characters being introduced, im expecting a massive plot-twist somehwere in betwen the climax.Kibura said: and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O kami_desu said: my fanart of lupa and JD http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg feel free to start fangirling ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^ the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out |
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| YEAH, PLOT TWIST PLEASE Lupadim runs away, shit got too gay for him And Lima comes in his place and goes all gay |
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| That was cute, but where're the lemons? |
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Lime_ said: Kibura said: and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O kami_desu said: my fanart of lupa and JD http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg feel free to start fangirling ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^ the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out yay~ http://i.imgur.com/tkTmCcV.jpg One day, I'll get better, and I'll start drawing actual guy on guy... |
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