| http://the-dent.deviantart.com/art/Kirito-Kun-485938280 What do you think. Made with 1H, 2H, HB pencils |
Ashente! |
| That's really good although since its from the back I can't see how good you are at drawing his face if you know what I mean. |
| I've been here way too long... |
| It's nicely done but it's a bit dull. It's a boring, overdone pose done by him. I'm really digging the linework though, it's just lacking the originality. I like it though. |
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| Nice drawing but I'd be more impressed if it were original. |
Ryugen said: Nice drawing but I'd be more impressed if it were original. Pretty much this. Also, I felt the outlines were too bold. Bring in more shadow and depth. |
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| Nice. A bit too much contrast in the image tho. |
mayukachan said: The contrast is what I really like about the drawing, if anything more contrast would be nice. With so much of Kirito being black everything that isn't black should pop.Nice. A bit too much contrast in the image tho. |
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ibearclaw said: mayukachan said: The contrast is what I really like about the drawing, if anything more contrast would be nice. With so much of Kirito being black everything that isn't black should pop.Nice. A bit too much contrast in the image tho. The main reason why i pointed that out is because it's a scan/photo of a pencil sketch so it has a lot of noise (graphic noise) already. increasing the contrast would emphasis the noise. |
| Your eagle drawing is really nice |
Stay in yesterday 時を止めて |
| Now that you've got a feel for kirito, try doing a bust drawing of him with using reference but make it an original drawing. :) Also look up anatomy reference as you draw. We've got a long running thread here for posting art and receiving critiques so maybe drop by (if you haven't already): http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=334&show=7200 o/ |
| Looks pretty cool man, keep it up! |
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