emeraldtryst said: Fantastic! Not going to even mention the cliffhanger with the actual cliff thing. (yeah...) I didn't mean to make it a joke thing, I swear! XD |
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| Aaaaaargh! I had a ton of shit to do lately, so I'm really very sorry for the delay! I didn't even had time to read some other stories, really, I'm terribly sorry. I'll do my best to have the next chapter ready in the next days!!! |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
Chapter 11 - Red, Blue and Green I can't say that I was thinking about the meaning of life, that I saw my life flash before me or anything fancy like that. When you're in a situation like that you're only scared as fuck. I mean, I don't actually know, but that was what I was doing at least. Being afraid of dying, that couldn't be such a strange thing after all. The strange thing is that it was like I could hear voices, besides the screaming of the Werewolf that was falling not far from me. 'At least it was cool until the end.' , 'Well, shit.' , 'And I haven't touched boobs yet.' Yeah, I could agree with all of that. Maybe I was getting crazy, but hey, that was fine with me at that point. Maybe that could have been an interesting way to end my life. That didn't last long though, as the disastrous sound of my body crashing on the ground stopped the flow of my thoughts. What I weren't expecting was that the impact didn't killed me in the spot. “Unlucky until the end *cough*... aren't we?” That's what I asked myself, when someone actually replied with a broken, faint voice. ”Well yes... seems like *cough*... we will have to suffer a little bit *cough*... more together before leaving this... world, ... boy” As I managed to look in the wolf girl direction the sight made me feel something breaking inside me. The macabre scene I was assisting to was too much for me. Her body crashed on a big rock, leaving her body in the middle of a pool of blood. ”*Tsk* I can't believe this... seems like *cough*... seems like I'll have to leave before you. In the end I actually... lost to a mere human...” “W-well, let's call *cough*... it a draw... shall we? Eheheh” ”Why... why didn't you stab me back there... instead of using a fucking fruit...” “Ahahah... that's probably because I'm a fuckin coward...” Dark red blood was coming out slowly from her mouth now. The evil, mad look she had before was now nothing but a peaceful and pale expression. The illusion of her smiling a bit flashed before my tired eyes. “Hey... that thing you said to me... the reason you attacked that little girl... is that really true? Why did you start *cough* *cough*...” I couldn't breathe well anymore, everytime I spoke it felt like being stabbed countless times inside my stomach. I couldn't finish my sentence. ”The strong killing the weak... yeah... *cough*... you know... I used to leave in a pack of Werewolves long ago... *cough* yeah... I miss those times so much... even now... *COUGH* *COUGH*” As my eyesight was starting to fade away I noticed the huge pool of blood around the poor girl. Enemy, assassin, haunter, killer... who I was looking at didn't matter anymore. I closed my eyes, I wasn't able to look at her anymore. ”Well, if you don't mind... I'll take my leave now... *cough*... see ya, hero.” I was now completely alone. The silence around me was heavy, the pressure of it was now crashing me against the ground. I couldn't even open my eyes anymore, the world around me got darker and darker in no time. It was like I was falling once again, but that time the cliff was way deeper than the others. I felt my own presence disappear, my consciousness becoming one with the deep darkness that was surrounding me. [ “So... is this how it feels when you die?” ”*Pokes*” “Like...” ”*Pokes*” “...really...” ”*Pokes*” “...annoying...? *slowly opens his eyes*” ”Oh my god, you were so fuckin cool out there, I'm so proud of you! T_T” ”*Slaps red* This is not the moment for that <_< … so, hi there!” ”I wonder if I should call you Master or something...? :D” “W-well... that's kinda weird... and gross... Sydo it's ok. Now... where the hell am I? Who are you guys?” I then realized that even if I was talking, my mouth was actually not moving at all. I could still hear the sound of my voice, but everything was sounding weird and blurry. ”Why are you only making difficult questions?” ”Welcome to the chat room! <3” ”Green seriously, shut the fuck up for a moment! è_é” ”Man, I don't know how to answer your questions... but I can tell you that since when I can remember... we have always been here with you.” ”Yeah, good job you stalkers.” ”*Ties up green and closes him inside a box* Is all of this a dream? Maybe you finally got crazy after all? We really can't tell.” “I wonder why... everytime I look at you guys I feel somehow... nostalgic...? Ahahah, yeah, even with that weird guy inside the box.” ”*Squirms* >.<” ”Yeah, I wonder why... I'm sorry, we'd love to stay here and talk with you more but... we must step aside and let you go now. ^^” ”We're not sure about what's happening out there right now, but it's probably better if you leave this place as soon as possible. You shouldn't be here.” “I-I see... but how do I leave this place exactly?” ”Well... you're not like us, you have people waiting for you out there, so it shouldn't be hard. Just remember them. The friends that care about you, the ones you want to protect.” ”Be sure to kick some asses for us too, and don't make the ladies cry, you jerk! è_é” ”Sydooo~ “ ”Sydooo~ … This is probably the first and last time we see each other. Be strong man, keep fighting, go on and never look back. Do it for us too. We'll always be by your side. ”Sydooooooo~ “ ”~ SYDOOOOOOO~ “ ] *SLAP* ”SYDOOOOO~ *crying* *SLAP* ”SYDOOOOOOOOO~ “C-could you please... *cough*... stop slapping my face? It.... r-really hurts...” "...!!" ”Kyaaaah!” *THUD* Suddenly, the fluffy sensation of being hit by a pillow. Then the terrible one of being hugged with force, when you feel like all your bones are shattered already. The desperate crying of a little mouse. The intense hug of a centipede. […] Chapter 11 – End Next Chapter – ...And I said all those embarrassing things too... Crap |
SydoKillerSep 5, 2014 3:57 AM
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| Sydoooooooo, don't die on us ;_; |
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| You fell from height that easily kills the werewolf, but even Death won't save you from Voices in your head! Voices! Sydovoices? Sydoices? I love the idea as story can continue regardless you are alive or dead, just with voices commenting on stuff. Spectator Mode! Brilliant. |
beast_regardsAug 25, 2014 4:10 AM
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beast_regards said: You fell from height that easily kills the werewolf, but even Death won't save you from Voices in your head! Voices! Sydovoices? Sydoices? I love the idea as story can continue regardless you are alive or dead, just with voices commenting on stuff. Spectator Mode! Brilliant. SydoKiller said: Her body crashed on a big rock I specified! ù_ù |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| Sydooooo~ @w@ now you know... when you die, you'll be trapped with me for eternity! |
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greatgreenman said: when you die, you'll be trapped with me for eternity! He already is. You are green voice I assume Blue voice is probably kami. I am not sure who is red one. |
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| he has denied green as being me, but I think he is just shy and doesn't want to admit to everyone that he's included me and kami in there ;).. he can't stop thinking about us, thus he personified our personalities as his pseudo conscience. |
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"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
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SydoKiller said: I should call you Master or something...? :D i think sydo is trying to tell you something green |
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| I've been wondering who those 3 idiots were. Stil not too clear on who they actually represent but I loved the little moment between all 4 of them. |
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beast_regards said: story can continue regardless you are alive or dead, just with voices commenting on stuff. Spectator Mode! Brilliant. One of the paperbacks in my book collection is a novel called Greatshadow. The narrator dies in the first chapter -- and continues to narrate the book. I was amazed by how well that worked. And the red voice is definitely not me. He doesn't sing, nor is he enough of a know-it-all. |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
tygertyger said: And the red voice is definitely not me. He doesn't sing, nor is he enough of a know-it-all. If I were you I would be disappointed. You definitely deserve your voice cast. |
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| This is getting even more interesting than I thought. *sips tea* |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
SydoKiller said: This is getting even more interesting than I thought. *sips tea* Careful with that tea. I saw Aloe putting something in it. |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
Clarus_Nox said: He's so sweet, but I can't yet hand over the mantle of the whip. He is still too green... :DSydoKiller said: I should call you Master or something...? :D i think sydo is trying to tell you something green tygertyger said: yes.... aloe did it...SydoKiller said: This is getting even more interesting than I thought. *sips tea* Careful with that tea. I saw Aloe putting something in it. |
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greatgreenman said: tygertyger said: yes.... aloe did it...Careful with that tea. I saw Aloe putting something in it.  |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| it 'tis too late, I am now inside you @w@... again.. |
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| Just how it needed to happen. Lovely =) Now for some rehabilitation! |
greatgreenman said: I am now inside you Top 1 quote from hentai |
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beast_regards said: greatgreenman said: I am now inside you Top 1 quote from hentai Top 1 quote from my MAL profile comments. Fucking **** ಠ_ಠ *kicks a rock* |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| you know what fits in those asterisks? Count the number of asterisks ;)... Sydo @w@.. I'm an expert Sydotranslator SydoKiller said: You shouldn't be so shy Sydo, we know you love it.Top 1 quote from my MAL profile comments. Fucking Sydo ^_^ *cuddles ggm* @Em: perfect timing with that comment btw lol |
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| Welcome back Sydo~ :> It's a good you thing you didn't really die. And blue, red and green's... dialogues? Keep getting funnier each time :> |
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| So yeah, I put a little picture on my profile so that maybe I can help with some more publicity for the club and the MSG. Just saying. Hope it helps. ù_ù ______________________________________________________________________________ Chapter 12 - ...And I said all those embarrassing things too... Crap ”...I'll never let you go again...” Laying on the ground, half dead, I was now facing an even worse situation than the death fight with the Werewolf. Too much affection can be quite scary sometimes, as the deadly hug of the centipede girl was showing me. The girl whispered something, but in my conditions I couldn't hear her words very well. “I-I can't really hear you...” ”...I-I'll never...” “E-Excuse me...?” ”I'LL NEVER LET YOU GO AGA-...” Aloe suddenly shouted without thinking. She stopped her sentence, after realizing it, and seeing my surprised expression, her face quickly became completely red. Ashamed of her own reaction she didn't stop her hug, that got stronger instead. “Aaargh! My bones!” ”...! *squeeze*” Despite her face was now covered again by her messy hair I could easily tell that she was awfully embarrassed, but the need to show her preoccupation about me was stronger than her. I finally realized that we were now inside what looked like some sort of cave. I was laying on a stack of straw, while a small fire was burning near. At the other side of the fire, a little girl was sitting in silence, holding her pillow between her small arms. Her face was looking tired and a bit red. Her eyes were a bit swollen, like the ones of someone that cried for a long time. She stared at the fire the whole time. She eventually looked up at me hearing my sorrowful screams, but our eyes never met. The situation was so awkward that I almost regretted being still alive. After some time I managed to break the ice. “So... did you carried me to this place? Where are we?” Still without letting go of me, hiding her face against my chest, Aloe replied. “You slept for two whole days. We found your body near a river, you were in the verge of death. Fortunately you got back to your senses soon enough, I couldn't stop Primula from slapping you... but seems like that worked fine somehow...” “W-what about the wolf girl...?” The girl just shook her head in response. The image of her broken body was still inside my head, hurting every inch of my heart. After a while Aloe finally let me go. I felt like my body was shouting his relief. She looked quickly at Primula, then she sighed deeply. ”I'll search for something to eat... I'll be back in a while. S-Sydo... if you dare moving from there I-I'll kill you...” She then left the cave, leaving me very troubled with her words. Not only that, I was scared that the silence now would eventually kill me. As I was thinking that I heard someone's footsteps. A small girl walked towards me, then she sat down next to me, without saying a word. Her stare went back to the fire. I was now laying on my back, my body was still hurting, so I couldn't even look at her. I just decided to talk to myself loud, looking at the ceiling of the cave. “You know... when I lost consciousness... I had a strange dream.” ”...” Primula didn't react at all at my words, but somehow I had the impression that she was listening to me. I had the cute image in my mind of her big, round ears moving a bit after my sentence. “I don't remember anymore what happened inside of it... then why? Why do I feel this strange sensation inside of me.. like... nostalgia?” ”...Dreams are an important part of our lives. They recollect all your emotions, important events and memories... it's like someone else is taking care of your thoughts for your other half, the one that is sleeping. Wouldn't you feel alone without dreams? Not having any would be like dying temporarily until you wake up again....” The girl finally spoke, even if she was still staring at the fire. She was a type of creature that was always in contact with sleep and dreams, her knowledge fascinated me. There were still so many things I wanted to ask her. “It's like you're never alone, uh? ...” I heard the girl moving near me, she was probably looking at me this time. But I still couldn't move my head from that position to know were she was exactly. ”W-why... *sob* why did you lie to me...?” Her sad words broke my heart into several pieces. That's right, I was the one who tricked her for all that time, taking advantage of her trust. I was not a hero, I had no rights to protect her, I was completely irresponsible for being so arrogant and thinking that I could take care of her. Now I had to pay the price for it, and take responsibility for everything. “I've never been the hero you wished for... I can't protect you anymore, I'm sorry. I-if something had gone wrong that time and that Werewolf had hurt you... I-I could nev-” That's when I finally saw Primula's face again, just above mine, directly staring at me. Her sparkling eyes were covered in big tears, that were now falling on my cheeks. Her mouth was trembling as she tried to speak again, despite her sobbing. ”I-I DON'T CARE ABOUT ALL THAT!! *sob* I'm sad because you never told me about it. I would have understood! Why haven't you *sob*...trusted me for all this time?? I just wanted to stay by your side... *sob*” With these last words she fell on my chest, crying loud, even if her tears couldn't come out anymore. That poor girl probably cried a lot during the past days. Even if I wanted to hug her with all my might, I only managed to pat her head. “I can't ask you to forgive me...” ”Promise me... *sniffle* that you'll never lie to me again... promise me! *sniffle*” “Y-yeah... I think I can do that at least...” [ ”*Sips tea*” ”*Sips tea*” … ”Well, aren't you crying this time? ù_ù” ”I'm currently charging my tears, so I'll be able to cry even louder later.” ”H-how can you even do that... whatever. <_<” ”Say... don't you think it has been pretty quiet lately? ò_ò” ”Nah, must be an impression. ù_ù” ”HALP! T_T *Still trying to get out from the box*” ] Chapter 12 – End Next Chapter – If I'm staring at the ceiling, I can't see the flags around me |
SydoKillerSep 5, 2014 3:58 AM
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
SydoKiller said: ”HALP! T_T *Still trying to get out from the box*” I am starting to love part with conversation between GGM's alter-ego, Kami's alter-ego and your dreams about molesting you :-D actually, shouldn't Primula be able to look behind the 4th wall and hear the voices too? It would be interesting if you and one companion hear voices that no one else can't |
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| Yay! Conflict resolved and now you can focus on...um...other things? |
emeraldtryst said: Yay! Conflict resolved and now you can focus on...um...other things? Loli love, for example. |
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beast_regards said: emeraldtryst said: Yay! Conflict resolved and now you can focus on...um...other things? Loli love, for example. Maybe, maybe. |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
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| "Charging my tears?" Srsly, Red? OK, I admit it. The voices get all of my favorite lines in this piece. |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
| Hahaha..I love reading Red, Blue, and Green's conversation all the time. Just imagining them in my head is too funny. Great chapter btw! |
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| let me out! You cannot stop the Sydolesting! *grumbles* So Sydo has become a paraplegic? I'm liking Aloe's character, shy yet forceful. It's an interesting combination. It's also nice to see Primula offer a bit of a confession as well. My one qualm "...a little girl was sitting in silence..." "A small girl walked towards me..." Are you just using her size as a descriptive element to make it seem more visually stimulating or are you referring to her in such a manner as a way of referencing her distant behavior. If its the later of the two, that's an impressive element that I only see from veteran writers (though using it twice is distracting), if its the other then its an unnecessary adjective that might be distracting. |
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greatgreenman said: let me out! You cannot stop the Sydolesting! *grumbles* So Sydo has become a paraplegic? I'm liking Aloe's character, shy yet forceful. It's an interesting combination. It's also nice to see Primula offer a bit of a confession as well. My one qualm "...a little girl was sitting in silence..." "A small girl walked towards me..." Are you just using her size as a descriptive element to make it seem more visually stimulating or are you referring to her in such a manner as a way of referencing her distant behavior. If its the later of the two, that's an impressive element that I only see from veteran writers (though using it twice is distracting), if its the other then its an unnecessary adjective that might be distracting. Holy shit, you're right ò_ò I do this thing a lot actually, and I'm not even sure why. Kinda comes naturally with the way I tell stories I guess. I didn't even realize it... I'll try to use it less, but I'm not sure I'll be able to though XD (BTW, SINCE WHEN DO YOU HAVE THAT PICTURE OF ME ON YOUR GADDEMN SIGNATURE!? WTF) |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| lol what picture @w@ Well if used properly its not too bad. The first time you used it in this post was alright, it actually kinda fit the mood of the chapter and I thought it was intentional. After you used it a second time though I wondered. |
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| I edited all the chapters and changed the dialogues of Blue, Red and Green italicising their text. Hope it will be easier to distinguish them from the others. That's the only reason, so there's no need to freak out ù_ù ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 13 - If I'm staring at the ceiling, I can't see the flags around me The scene between me and Primula in the cave, with her sniffling on my chest, was cute. It really was... for the first 15 minutes. After that the situation got incredibly awkward. I had no idea what to say anymore and above all... where to touch. Why wasn't she letting me go? Was she feeling too awkward now to move from there? I started sweating, as the panic was having the best of me. Girls were really sensitive about this kind of things, I couldn't screw up. As I was trying my best to find something to say to her... ...my jaw dropped. Primula slowly climbed my body, until she found herself on the top of me. Even if I couldn't almost move my body at all, I managed to move my head and look at her face. She was completely red, I could now feel her body slightly trembling against me. Her embarrassed expression made me turn pale. -Girls were really sensitive about this kind of things- MY FUCKING ASS! Primula slowly approached her face towards mine, her glistening blue eyes left me without words, making me forget for a moment about the dangerous situation that I was falling into. Her long, beautiful hair were now falling on my shoulders, as their mesmerizing sweet smell was making my head light like a feather. [ ”Oh shit shit shit shit shit! *holding his head with his hands*” ”Oh shit shit shit shit shit! *desperately trying to find a lawyer*” ”Oh shit shit shit shit shit! *fighting to take off his pants, but his belt is stuck* è_é” ] ”What the fuck is going on here!?” *Slam* A strong sound of something hitting the floor made us both jump in surprise. Aloe was standing there and judging form her killing intent she was really pissed off. A huge pile of fishes was lying beside her. She then picked up Primula with one hand and looked straight at her face. ”The heck do you think you're doing, you little mouse?” ”I-It's none of your business, y-you... you old bug! With Aloe holding her midair, the little girl was now squirming and hitting her with her little pillow multiple times to get free. I also noticed her little tail swirling around a bit. Sometimes I found myself forgetting about their real nature. We're different, they're not human like me. How that thing could influence my life right now? Could I really be able to just don't pay attention on something like that? ”O-o-old... b-bug... you little insolent brat! I'm a really young girl you know??” ”I-I'm older than I look too! Give me some respect!” “Come on girls... let's just calm down a bit an-” ”And you shut up! You'll have a lot to explain me later! *THUD* The well known sensation of a flying pillow hitting my face, once again. […] That evening I was finally starting to feel better, after almost three days under the cures of the two girls. Primula's medicinal herbs were incredible as always. The three of us had dinner together inside the cave, but the awkward silence never left the place. After a while Primula and Aloe left and went towards the deepest part of the cave. A few minutes later only the Oomukade came back. “Where did Primula go?” ”I left her deeper in the cave since she was starting to fall asleep. It's a safe place, so you don't need to worry. You know that she has problems sleeping with other people at night, right?” “Y-yeah, I somehow realized that. I won't ask her why yet, I'll wait until she will tell me about it I guess. Are you sure she won't be scared to be alone in a dark place like that though?” ”Sure, she'll be fine.” I had the strange impression that Aloe was trying not to laugh at those words, but maybe I was worrying too much. I was sitting next to the fire, watching the small flame slowly moving was somehow interesting. Or maybe it's better saying that it was the only thing that I could do to avoid to stare at the girl. She quietly sit next to me and started looking at the fire as well. The fresh air coming from the entrance of the cave made the flame dance. A beautiful scenery then occurred, with all the shadows moving around the walls of the cave, making several minerals shine with mysterious faint lights. ”You'd never think to see something so beautiful inside a dark, creepy cave until you experience it by yourself, isn't it?” I nodded, still fascinated from that impressive sight. There were still so many things I hadn't seen in my life yet and the idea of it was both intriguing and scary. After a bit of silence, the girl spoke again. ”Say... are you scared of me...?” I literally froze at those words. Not because I didn't know how to reply to her, the motive was something else. Thinking that she has been bothered with that thought for so long already and that I didn't notice it... that idea hurt me more than being stabbed. I then noticed from the shadow at the end of the other side of the cave, that the girl was slightly moving her little antennas, probably because she was nervous. “Do you remember that time, when you saved me from that boar? After our eyes met you thought that I was scared and you decided to run away... isn't it?” ”...” “Well, I always wanted to apologize for that... but I can assure you that I wasn't afraid, I was just surprised. You and Primula were the first non human beings that I met, so I really had no idea how to relate to you.” I then turned my look away from the fire, to meet her eyes, now sure of what I had to say. Aloe was staring at me as well. Her long hair, that were always covering a bit her eyes, were moving with the gentle breeze coming from the entrance. I could now see her beautiful eyes once again. Monster or not, her look made my heart race inside my body. “What I've seen so far though, it's not really that far from a pretty, courageous girl.” I then smiled at her, finally proud of having been able to express my feelings. Aloe's face suddenly burst into a deep red color. She quickly turned her eyes to the ground, babbling something incomprehensible. ”O-oh well, it's r-r-r-really late... I really think t-t-that...” As she met my interrogative expression again, she took an old blanket and quickly covered herself, turning her back to me. ”G-g-g-g-g...GOODNIGHT!” I then followed her example, still troubled at the thought of having said something that could have somehow offended her. I felt asleep pretty quickly, at the thought of the long day that was waiting for us. ”P-p-pretty girl... *cuddles up*” Chapter 13 – End Next Chapter – If the dice rolls a six, I'll only step forward to three |
SydoKillerSep 5, 2014 3:59 AM
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
SydoKiller said: Hahaha Their little exchanges always make me laugh. ”Oh shit shit shit shit shit! *fighting to take off his pants, but his belt is stuck* è_é” ] And that Hero is quite a stud eh? ;) |
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SydoKiller said: ”Oh shit shit shit shit shit! *fighting to take off his pants, but his belt is stuck* è_é” ] i laughed hard at this so is it safe to say this is how you see green? |
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| And ... nothing ... You somehow need to update if GGM is Green and Kami is Blue :) And who is Red... It is obviously a important part of the story, you should make an entire chapter made of their conversation. Especially if you are asleep. |
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| Heh. Mouse loli h-scene... DENIED! Bug girl h-scene... DENIED! Way to tease us there, Sydo. :) |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
beast_regards said: And ... nothing ... You somehow need to update if GGM is Green and Kami is Blue :) And who is Red... It is obviously a important part of the story, you should make an entire chapter made of their conversation. Especially if you are asleep. ha! oh god that'd be hilarious |
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beast_regards said: And ... nothing ... You somehow need to update if GGM is Green and Kami is Blue :) And who is Red... It is obviously a important part of the story, you should make an entire chapter made of their conversation. Especially if you are asleep. tygertyger said: Heh. Mouse loli h-scene... DENIED! Bug girl h-scene... DENIED! Way to tease us there, Sydo. :) For both of you, I'm not going to show my ace cards like that yet XD Especially about Red, Blue and Green. |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| All this double standard silliness. Sydo can't lie about being a hero but mousey gets to lie about sleepy time? Let the truth be heard! (and/or discovered colorfully) =) |
greatgreenman said: @Em: You know women have double standards like that lol, its okay if they lie or keep secrets but we can't. @beast: he's always thinking of us :P @Sydo:... I won't take my pants off for a loli scene @w@ Stop lying to yourself ù_ù |
"You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
SydoKiller said: Stop lying to yourself ù_ù You obviously have them playing important role in your story, so I guess GGM's assessment is perfectly articulate. |
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