| change the color hair of Gasai, Yuno and increase her breast size for the plot |
 |
CountDigBick said: So your idea to make the story better is to make the actual elements of storytelling worse.Yeah, most people would be crapping themselves silly in that situation of a survival game but it's an Anime, so go wild. Brilliant. |
 |
| Get rid of Yuki. |
 |
| Game of thrones was fine indeed |
| Beta never gives up Never hide, Never be discouraged Never accept friendzone |
DrGeroCreation said: Get rid of Yuki. No way. Actually get rid of the battle shounen-esque battle at the end of the series, and to shut up a few people who are but complainers, delete the second rape scene, not to mention it wasn't in the original material. |
 |
| Delete it from MAL, that would help I think. |
 |
| Having a completely different cast of characters would be a good start... |
| 5 main aspects I base my ratings on: 1. Did DramaEnthusiast make a thread about it? 2. Is it better than Breaking Bad? 3. Did MellowJello recommend the shit out of it? 4. Has it caused a (very entertaining) shitstorm on MAL? 5. Is it actually good? Scratch the fifth point, it's not very relevant... |
pLaguE_ said: Delete it from MAL, that would help I think. lol. |
|
| if future diary focused less on the crap plot and more on the fight scenes it would of been quite a bit better |
| Just because you know how to use a torrent does not give you the god given right to pirate. My actual list: https://kitsu.io/users/mattbenz99/library check out my youtube channel for my review: https://www.youtube.com/user/mattbenz99 |
| Have less unneeded harem/ecchi elements and not have huge plot holes. Get rid of useless characters like Hinata and her breast loving friend. Get rid of murmur. Just made the show much better. Could rant all day on how poorly the plot was thought out. Oh yeah, also fix the story. Or don't focus on it and develop better fight scenes. That last one was just shit and the one with the 12th was pathetically short, obvious and predictable. |
DrGeroCreation said: Get rid of Yuki. That's a good place to start. |
 |
| If every girl could get character development without getting raped, that'd be good. Also, replace the author with a monkey would probably improve the plot. |
sonnandeskcar said: If every girl could get character development without getting raped, that'd be good. Also, replace the author with a monkey would probably improve the plot. Rape = plot progression |
|
| And yet Yukki was probably best character. Removing him and you lose any shred of decency this Manga had. |
 |
| Topic Moved Belong under anime being discussed~ |
 Where there is no imagination there is no horror. || Arthur Conan Doyle || Happy Halloween! |
| Did someone say something about improving MAL Wiki? Oh, wrong thread . . . On topic: without the whining crybaby of a MC who slowly developes himself - what would you be left with? I mean, it's garbage as it is, but take that bit of characterizatoin out and I think you'd have a steaming pile of poop. . Lemme guess, you also think Shinji was a horrible character in Evangaleon? |
  Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet |
| Nothing could make it better. Car crash of a series. |
Lime_ said: Just imagine taking Heredity out of the Mal wiki.Did someone say something about improving MAL Wiki? He may be pretty wimpy, but without him, where does the balance go? |
|
CountDigBick said: Watch it the next time you take a dump.Lime_ said: Did someone say something about improving MAL Wiki? Oh, wrong thread . . . On topic: without the whining crybaby of a MC who slowly developes himself - what would you be left with? I mean, it's garbage as it is, but take that bit of characterizatoin out and I think you'd have a steaming pile of poop. . Lemme guess, you also think Shinji was a horrible character in Evangaleon? Never watched it. Like the opening theme song though. |
|
| Let Madhouse animate it and correct all wrongs |
FragOutFire said: Why am I a Berserk fan? All I ever experience is pain. We are in the eclipse and Miura has sacrificed us |
| Change the MC's personality, make Yuno less annoying, change most of the voices and get rid of episode 25. |
| Signature removed. Please follow the signature rules, as defined in the Site & Forum Guidelines. |
| Make the characters more developed and separate character arcs to understand them better as they are very underdeveloped and lame it ruined the show. Make the MC more interesting and develop his personality. Change yuno's hair colour and voice to make her less annoying. And specifically get rid of that shitty ending. |
Full_anime_FanMay 2, 2020 2:48 AM
バンの一味 |
More topics from this board
Poll: » Mirai Nikki Episode 1 Discussion ( 1 2 3 )MorningGlory - Dec 9, 2010 |
144 |
by Munchkin3
»»
Jul 9, 4:33 PM |
|
» Is this different from the TV series?SinLegend - Nov 14, 2023 |
3 |
by SinLegend
»»
Nov 14, 2023 7:37 AM |
|
Poll: » Mirai Nikki An Abridged Seriesdustinator1991 - Jan 29, 2015 |
38 |
by KDavidMVergara
»»
Mar 13, 2021 4:43 PM |
|
» Mirai nikki is confusing me! (Spoilers)Sushi_Chibi - Dec 30, 2013 |
21 |
by agittunc
»»
Sep 5, 2019 11:20 PM |
|
» God of the third world?yg01 - Mar 24, 2018 |
0 |
by yg01
»»
Mar 24, 2018 2:36 PM |