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Jan 7, 2019 7:37 PM
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So here's a poem I just wrote, thought I might as well share it so here it is.

Chocolate

Chocolate falling on your head,
Almost made you fall out of bed.
Grab It,
Lick it,
Swirl it in your mouth.
The thick texture so warm and sweet,
Chew it up like a nice tasty treat!
Melting, Melting, all over your tongue,
Eating chocolate ever since you were young!
Forget all the sorrow,
When you eat up tomorrow.
The flavors of youth,
The flavors of hope.
All put together in this one dream.
Your parents walk in the room,
We really got to fix the plumbing.
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---Sean The Magical Weeaboo
Jan 8, 2019 2:42 AM
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honestly beautiful. i'm unable to express how the lines affected me emotionally - there's something so powerful about that intro too, 'chocolate falling on your head'. nice work.
AnimeFreak-San said:
is this a male gender issure...human issue...mental illness perhaps?
Jan 17, 2019 7:00 AM
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I totally agree with the above user. :')
It just shows how much you love chocolate!

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