Sensou no Tsukurikata

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English Dubbed

Story
A fascinating viewpoint structure of not only japan's past but possible future. With many people growing to believe in psychics given 2012 and other predictions made in past coming somewhat true. It is only a matter of time before this work as well is praised for its finding. My main concern with this was its structure.

No, not by presentation. As for presentation it did its job. It depicted images kids could see/relate to. But more of how information was portrayed that was my concern. Before i go into detail understand i am an adult and i found the script to be ... rather confusing. And if i found it confusing how can you expect a child to grasp it? For example, in America many people struggle with the double negatives. Such as, "did you tell a lie?" a response "No i didn't tell no lie." Lots of negatives being used. When one could have simple stated I am not lying. I am not saying negatives were used but the back and forth presentation from past to future as well as the constant questions were the problem. A plain old slowly progression statement after statement forward progression would have been a better procedure format. Although confusing one can still grasp a little bit of its message.