Apr 24, 2018
I don't think the story is bad. But i feel it fails in what it's trying to do.
The story is about an OP Elf that is hiding her identity at a Guild. While the story seems to want to be about the MC working behind the scenes. It fails. Nothing of interest really happens and i most of the time am wanting to see a story about our MC's adventure from being reincarnated.
Honestly we are told all these interesting things such as her defeating an Evil God, Befriending the Dragon God and even befriending the Mermaids. But instead of hearing about her adventures, We
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get these boring scenes with her never ever really leaving the guild.
We are told that this worlds parents abandoned her and was driven out of the Elf village for her powers. I would love to see a story telling the adventures of the girl having to deal with being abandoned and having to make a living for herself. Story would be about her becoming OP as she travels the world. Once the Elf kingdom or village or whatever learns about her power and her position with humans. They then want her back and to marry her off to someone. Kind of like how it happened in the actual story but have it more expanded on.
Honestly, There isn't any need for the MC to be a former male. It changes nothing besides the MC being attracted to females still. The story could've easily have had the MC always of been a girl even before she was reincarnated and it wouldn't change anything. The story could even not have any reincarnating in it and have it just be about an OP female Elf growing up ( Obviously keep in the Yuri...)
The story kind of teases it on and off but i wish it would either pick whether the MC will have a romance partner or not. I just want her to pick any of the girls in this already. Kind of annoying how it's strung along
Overall not a bad story but it does have some glaring issues.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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