Douyara Watashi no Karada wa Kanzen Muteki no you desu ne
The Invincible Little Lady

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Calling this story lazy and contrived would be about the most generous thing one could say about it. It will leave you sighing and the characters behavior will leave you asking the same question over and over again: 'why?' Most of these why comes from the almost fanatic obstinance against standing out, having people talk about, being good at something and so on. The MC doesn't seem to have any motivation to be like this and it is just an end goal in of itself where all of her motivation stems from. Having the attention of lots of people can be somewhat annoying but her ... actions make it out as if it where the end of the world if people found that she was remarkable.

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One of these times where when she won the combat tournament that left her in a depressed state for two weeks. There just isn't enough motivation established to support this behavior. That fact she wanted a life that wasn't bound by a hospital bed dosen't mean wanting a unremarkable life. it just feels like something that was done to have any sort of conflict for a virtually immortal character. But I just feel there should have been a better and clearer motivation behind it. Even more so as to why she hasn't told anyone else besides her maid that she is extremely remarkable.

On the topic of being a virtually immortal character. She is inexplicitly skittish for having a body that can't be harmed. It was passable the first time it happened with the giant snake. Even if you know something is entirely safe you can't help being scared of it in the beginning. But this trends continues in this story. So it doesn't make sense why she would act the way she does well after coming to terms with not being able to be harmed.

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And that is just talking about the main characters. The rest doesn't even get enough attention to have any motivation to question.

story: 5. Nothing you haven't seen in other isekais.
world: 4. Very bare bone with very little explored that isn't immediately necessary for the plot.
magic system: 5. Had the characters been any more interesting I would not think it was impossible for this magic system to interesting if explored. Though it is generic.
character: 1-2: Just bad
illustrations: 5. They all look decently drawn but basically none of them depict anything interesting that I would like a depiction of.