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May 23, 2014 9:08 AM

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This story is quite interesting how I wish I could be in here as well ;w; I wonder who will win the battle :D
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kanakura said:
This story is quite interesting how I wish I could be in here as well ;w; I wonder who will win the battle :D


People are welcome to join the cast at any time.
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May 23, 2014 9:19 AM

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If anything, I want to be an specialist in CQC (Krav Maga)
May 23, 2014 9:20 AM

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God-of-Harem said:
kanakura said:
This story is quite interesting how I wish I could be in here as well ;w; I wonder who will win the battle :D


People are welcome to join the cast at any time.
Thank you very much! I'm looking forward to it :D
May 23, 2014 9:21 AM

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lupadim said:
If anything, I want to be an specialist in CQC (Krav Maga)


I reckon I can do that.

EDIT: I hadn't slept for two days when I wrote chapter one. Now that I'm rested, expect a better chapter
BaileyyMay 23, 2014 10:22 AM
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May 23, 2014 10:23 AM

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Im not sure what kind of weapon of style I would want so I'll leave it to your judgement. Just make sure im not soft I intent to give Lupadim and any other perv a good punch but I should totes be wearing this:
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/160/0/d/uryuu_minene___9th_by_mtrizkit-d4tmuc5.png
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May 23, 2014 10:59 AM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Im not sure what kind of weapon of style I would want so I'll leave it to your judgement. Just make sure im not soft I intent to give Lupadim and any other perv a good punch but I should totes be wearing this:
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/160/0/d/uryuu_minene___9th_by_mtrizkit-d4tmuc5.png
As if you would be able to touch a CQC master. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mblxMxqqq8I
May 23, 2014 11:02 AM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Im not sure what kind of weapon of style I would want so I'll leave it to your judgement. Just make sure im not soft I intent to give Lupadim and any other perv a good punch but I should totes be wearing this:
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/160/0/d/uryuu_minene___9th_by_mtrizkit-d4tmuc5.png


The maid outfit is a given.
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May 23, 2014 1:19 PM

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Ah so apperance and weapons suggestions? Tell me what limits are there, I mean like firearms, knives, etc?
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RedArmyShogun said:
Ah so apperance and weapons suggestions? Tell me what limits are there, I mean like firearms, knives, etc?


From the impression I got you're limited to one weapon of choice :S.
May 23, 2014 1:23 PM

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Ah, I can have a weapon as well? Well, any gentleman wearing a fedora must have a mastercrafted knife.
May 23, 2014 1:24 PM

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You can improve it by putting me in the coming chapters.
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May 23, 2014 1:40 PM

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Astros477 said:
RedArmyShogun said:
Ah so apperance and weapons suggestions? Tell me what limits are there, I mean like firearms, knives, etc?


From the impression I got you're limited to one weapon of choice :S.


Goood goood *Rubs hands together*
May 23, 2014 1:42 PM

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RedArmyShogun said:


Goood goood *Rubs hands together*


Let me guess Ak-47? with extended mags?
May 23, 2014 1:45 PM

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Astros477 said:
RedArmyShogun said:


Goood goood *Rubs hands together*


Let me guess Ak-47? with extended mags?


Goddamnit.

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I mean n..no
May 23, 2014 3:19 PM

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I don't mind giving people more than one weapon, but I'd rather they didn't have an entire arsenal.

For example, it's not unusual for a sniper to have a combat knife for close range.

@RedArmyShogun, I already introduced your character in chapter one, but to be fair, I think it won't be too hard to change your weapon.
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May 23, 2014 3:48 PM

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Ehh just leave it, interested in where you'll take it.

I myself would use some form of firearm and a dagger or combat knife. So just play it like you are. If you don't have his clothing fixed, some form of camo would be nice.
May 23, 2014 4:16 PM

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i dont really care for personality and skills but i would probably use a machine pistol as a main firearm
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May 23, 2014 8:58 PM

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Can you add me in as the spunky water boy that always watches every formation during practices, and spends all his free time working on his throwing accuracy. Then when the star QB (who happens to be my childhood friend who knows how fanatical about the game I am) gets his arm injured in a car accident that wasn't his fault (he was actually trying to keep his buddy from driving drunk, but got swept away into the whole thing), he tells the coach to put me in. At first, everyone is apprehensive, and looks down on the idea of the water boy getting involved on the turf, but throughout all the ups and downs, with quick wits and a whole lot of heart, we manage to come together and make it to state for our injured teammate.

Something like that, please.
May 23, 2014 9:05 PM

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The remake to Bruce Lee's classic Enter the Dragon has commenced.
May 23, 2014 10:41 PM

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Oh can I join too?
I want to that mystery transfer student who doesn't talk.
For a weapon I want the ability to telepathically wield thirteen swords to attack and fly with.

May 23, 2014 10:50 PM

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Maybe Red could be the guy who uses the sword to give off the appearance of being lightly armed, before pulling a rifle straight out of his ass.

Not much of a suggestion, but it'd be nice if Yoro was a little more perceptive and a tinge less stoic than in MAL Saga, just to make it more fitting.

Edit: Going by the post count, this and Mal saga will be our two most popular MALfics as chapters are released.
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YorozuyaGinSan said:
Maybe Red could be the guy who uses the sword to give off the appearance of being lightly armed, before pulling a rifle straight out of his ass.


Not a bad idea actually. I think I could implement that pretty nicely.

YorozuyaGinSan said:
Not much of a suggestion, but it'd be nice if Yoro was a little more perceptive and a tinge less stoic than in MAL Saga, just to make it more fitting.


Sure thing. Any weapon or weapons of choice?

YorozuyaGinSan said:
Going by the post count, this and Mal saga will be our two most popular MALfics as chapters are released.


Yey ^^
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May 24, 2014 2:43 AM

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Chapter 2: Entry Exams


The school was like a modern castle. Nestled in the canopy of tropical trees, on the horizon lay a series of buildings towering at least two-hundred meters tall and the width of the entire land mass. The path leading to the school was long, but looked like a peaceful walk. The air smelt clean. Goh closed his eyes. What a peaceful place. It's almost as though something is calling to me... 'EXCUSE ME!' the voice sounded annoyed. Goh jumped. 'Glad I got your attention.' The face smiled. She was an attractive girl who looked to be in her early twenties, she had long black hair. She wore a frilly black maid-costume and had a jet-pack on her back. There was a shotgun strapped to her chest. Goh stepped back, intimated. 'I don't bite.' she chuckled holding out her hand. 'I'm Kibura. 3rd year at BAMAL. Ranked 356th. You must be Goh.' Goh reluctantly shook hands with her.

'How do you know my name?' Goh asked. 'I'm here to guide you to the entry exams. We should probably hurry, everybody else is already there.' Goh's eyes darted from the school then back to Kibura. 'W-wait, entry exams? What do you mean? I-I haven't studied!' Kibura looked at Goh with a quizzical look. 'You don't need to study for a battle, silly. You get pitted against an instructer, who will determine your skill and your rank within the school system. Although you already know. C'mon, let's go now.' Kibura began walking towards the school and Goh followed. Goh didn't want to answer back at the risk of sounding stupid. A battle? This is so sudden! Goh thought. His hands were shaking, but not because he was scared. He was strangely excited.

The door to the practice arena was huge. Made out of some sort of ancient oak. It arched many meters over Goh's head. It creaked as Kibura pushed it open. There was the sound of clashing steel within the pit in the arena, though the room that Goh was standing in was not the arena. He was surrounded by all sorts of weapons. Practically every type of gun on the that could ever exist, hundreds of varieties of blades, knives, staves and countless other weapons. None of them looked like they were for show. 'Come on, pick your weapon.' Kibura insisted. 'You should be up next.'

Goh's jaw dropped. 'W-weapon!? I don't want to kill anyone!' Kibura smirked. 'You must be kidding right? You ain't gonna be killing anybody, I assure you. Oh yeah. One last thing. Chose carefully, the weapon you chose in this room right now is your default weapon for the next five years, here at BAMAL. Unless you've bought your own to this island or unless you break the one you chose, you won't be getting another. Whether you choose to modify the weapon or not is up to you.' Goh's eyes scanned over the weapons. There was too much to chose from. Goh's hand was shaking as he reached above a rack of weapons, but he felt confident in what his hands grabbed onto.

The sound of clashing metal continued as Goh entered the arena. Thirteen people sat in the stands observing the current exam. Probably the other chosen scholars. Goh thought. Kibura patted Goh on the back. 'Well, this is as far as I go. Good luck!' She smiled and left back the way they entered. Goh joined with some exhausted looking people equipped with all kinds of weapons, it was obvious that they'd already taken their exams. Goh stood next to a boy leaning against the railing. He had a sniper rifle rested against the railing beside him, and a large combat knife strapped to his hip along with a Desert Eagle. He wore padded thick combat armour and had medium length blonde hair, he was about Goh's age. 'This guy is unbelievable...' he whispered to himself. Goh looked into the arena. It was Red. He was dual-wielding both of his katana, and the instructor wielded a long sword and shield. The instructor was being pushed back on his heels. he timer showed thirty seconds left on the clock.

Red and the instructor took a moment to catch their breath. 'You cocky bastard...' The instructor growled at Red. Red cackled. 'What's wrong, sir instructor? Is that all you have to offer?' Red scoffed. 'Pathetic.' The instructor was enraged. He let out a scream and charged at Red. He pumped his kite-shaped shield at Red anticipating Red to strike first. Instead Red had danced to his left where the instructors right shoulder was exposed. The instructor had no time to react as Red sliced his sword horizontally into the instructor's shield-bearing wrist. The instructor howled in pain and released his grip on the shield. Blood began to pool on the ground and the instructor doubled over in pain. Red's eyes dilated like a wild beast at the smell of fresh blood. He brought his sword back to slice but the instructor had regained his bearings, and swivelled several steps back. Red had no intention of letting his prey escape. Launching a series of combinations using both of his swords against the retreating instructor, eventually led to him being backed against the wall of the pit. The instuctors limply held longsword was knocked out of his hand, and he fell down and braced. Red laughed like the maniac that he is. He brought his sword back to deliver the killing blow. The forghorn sounding the end of the battle sounded. The blade stopped just less than a centimeter away from the instructor's face. Piss dribbled down the instructor's leg and it pooled with the blood from his wounds. He was sobbing hysterically.

'Red...' Goh said to himself. The boy next to him looked over to him. 'Ah you must be the rumoured 15th scholar. I was wondering when you'd show up. You know him? He's scary.' Rumoured? Goh thought. 'Yeah, I took the ferry here with him.' The boy nodded his head. 'Nice. I'm Railey by the way. Professional Marksman. I got ranked 390th. I hope we can become friends.' Goh shook his hand. 'I'm Goh. I'm not really a professional anything, but I am a talented boxer.' Railey let out a hearty laugh. 'We know who you are, silly! At any rate, you should get ready. Your exam is starting.' Goh was the most confused he'd been from the start of this whole thing.
End of Chapter
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May 24, 2014 2:58 AM
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looks really interesting.looking forward to the next chapter :)
May 24, 2014 3:24 AM

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Yeah, Red really needs to get his ass kicked, the smug brat.
God-of-Harem said:

Sure thing. Any weapon or weapons of choice?
A sword would be cool, preferably something European like a rapier. Or we could go straight to the mecha belt, lol.
May 24, 2014 3:40 AM
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It's starting to get interesting! Red seems to be a cool character! Can't wait for the next chapters!
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Fuusuke said:
It's starting to get interesting! Red seems to be a cool character! Can't wait for the next chapters!

Red is so cool indeed :D I hope I can be as cool as him when my character shows up :D but it's up to goh :D
May 24, 2014 3:52 AM

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AkatsukiWolf said:
Oh can I join too?
I want to that mystery transfer student who doesn't talk.
For a weapon I want the ability to telepathically wield thirteen swords to attack and fly with.


Oh man, I only just realised your post. Sure man. But I think that weapon is a bit OP. But I think I can do something like that, not to that extent though.
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Argh, I hate it when the cocky bastard has the bite to back up the bark :I
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i hope someone slaps red right in the dick.
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May 24, 2014 4:41 AM

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By the way guys, if you do happen to message me how you want your character to be, then you will probably get introduced earlier, because there's less planning for me.
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May 24, 2014 4:59 AM
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you even got my hair color right.. coincidence?

nice chapter, keep it up!
May 24, 2014 5:04 AM

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Railey is coolest niqur thus far.
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YorozuyaGinSan said:
Yeah, Red really needs to get his ass kicked, the smug brat.
Already looking forward to the fated day he's gonna get his sweet double sword-wielding butt handed to him. would be much fun if NarTaco was the one to do it hehe

Looks interesting. I really like the way you write the fight scenes. Keep up the good work, m8.
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there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief

And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat.
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Depending on how things go I'll most likely write two chapters tomorrow.

Emnay said:
i hope someone slaps red right in the dick.


Who has the game to do that though? Perhaps we will find out.

Sapewloth said:

Looks interesting. I really like the way you write the fight scenes. Keep up the good work, m8.


Thanks :D
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May 24, 2014 9:28 AM

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Funny enough that sounds like about how I would fight in that situation.
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Interesting so far. Can't wait for red to be defeated by a lesser combatant, then join their team and help them win.... thats what happens in anime at-least.
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Funny enough that sounds like about how I would fight in that situation.
you would let him live?
*surprised*
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I gotta keep a log of how everyone wants their characters so I don't have to keep sifting through the thread, my messages, and my profile all the time >,<
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Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio?
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio?


Would certainly help. But if you want to leave it up to me, then that's fine.
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio?


Just have Kibura pm you everyones character bio - she already collected all that with the on highschool thread, rite? :p

sneakysneaky

edit: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1135607

for reference^^



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May 24, 2014 2:59 PM

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Why is it everyone can locate that thread but me when I needed it.
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Lime_ said:
Kibura_Iburasa said:
Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio?


Just have Kibura pm you everyones character bio - she already collected all that with the on highschool thread, rite? :p

sneakysneaky

edit: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1135607

for reference^^


I'm not sure that I want to do that lol.
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Because I stalk you

Hmm you can use google to search through MAL threads, end the search with site:myanimelist.net/forum/

no rly, i do stalk you http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/002/a/7/yandere_yuno_gasai_by_yunogasai_marceline-d5q6na7.jpg

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Because I stalk you


So thats why Ive felt watched recently....http://37.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m02imqXVXw1qbvovho1_500.gif
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does what I sent count as a character bio?
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Emnay said:
does what I sent count as a character bio?
Did you just send a single, solitaire word?




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Lime_ said:
Emnay said:
does what I sent count as a character bio?
Did you just send a single, solitaire word?

I didn't send anything to do with sluts
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