| Oh can I join too? I want to that mystery transfer student who doesn't talk. For a weapon I want the ability to telepathically wield thirteen swords to attack and fly with. |
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| Maybe Red could be the guy who uses the sword to give off the appearance of being lightly armed, before pulling a rifle straight out of his ass. Not much of a suggestion, but it'd be nice if Yoro was a little more perceptive and a tinge less stoic than in MAL Saga, just to make it more fitting. Edit: Going by the post count, this and Mal saga will be our two most popular MALfics as chapters are released. |
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YorozuyaGinSan said: Maybe Red could be the guy who uses the sword to give off the appearance of being lightly armed, before pulling a rifle straight out of his ass. Not a bad idea actually. I think I could implement that pretty nicely. YorozuyaGinSan said: Not much of a suggestion, but it'd be nice if Yoro was a little more perceptive and a tinge less stoic than in MAL Saga, just to make it more fitting. Sure thing. Any weapon or weapons of choice? YorozuyaGinSan said: Going by the post count, this and Mal saga will be our two most popular MALfics as chapters are released. Yey ^^ |
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Chapter 2: Entry Exams The school was like a modern castle. Nestled in the canopy of tropical trees, on the horizon lay a series of buildings towering at least two-hundred meters tall and the width of the entire land mass. The path leading to the school was long, but looked like a peaceful walk. The air smelt clean. Goh closed his eyes. What a peaceful place. It's almost as though something is calling to me... 'EXCUSE ME!' the voice sounded annoyed. Goh jumped. 'Glad I got your attention.' The face smiled. She was an attractive girl who looked to be in her early twenties, she had long black hair. She wore a frilly black maid-costume and had a jet-pack on her back. There was a shotgun strapped to her chest. Goh stepped back, intimated. 'I don't bite.' she chuckled holding out her hand. 'I'm Kibura. 3rd year at BAMAL. Ranked 356th. You must be Goh.' Goh reluctantly shook hands with her. 'How do you know my name?' Goh asked. 'I'm here to guide you to the entry exams. We should probably hurry, everybody else is already there.' Goh's eyes darted from the school then back to Kibura. 'W-wait, entry exams? What do you mean? I-I haven't studied!' Kibura looked at Goh with a quizzical look. 'You don't need to study for a battle, silly. You get pitted against an instructer, who will determine your skill and your rank within the school system. Although you already know. C'mon, let's go now.' Kibura began walking towards the school and Goh followed. Goh didn't want to answer back at the risk of sounding stupid. A battle? This is so sudden! Goh thought. His hands were shaking, but not because he was scared. He was strangely excited. The door to the practice arena was huge. Made out of some sort of ancient oak. It arched many meters over Goh's head. It creaked as Kibura pushed it open. There was the sound of clashing steel within the pit in the arena, though the room that Goh was standing in was not the arena. He was surrounded by all sorts of weapons. Practically every type of gun on the that could ever exist, hundreds of varieties of blades, knives, staves and countless other weapons. None of them looked like they were for show. 'Come on, pick your weapon.' Kibura insisted. 'You should be up next.' Goh's jaw dropped. 'W-weapon!? I don't want to kill anyone!' Kibura smirked. 'You must be kidding right? You ain't gonna be killing anybody, I assure you. Oh yeah. One last thing. Chose carefully, the weapon you chose in this room right now is your default weapon for the next five years, here at BAMAL. Unless you've bought your own to this island or unless you break the one you chose, you won't be getting another. Whether you choose to modify the weapon or not is up to you.' Goh's eyes scanned over the weapons. There was too much to chose from. Goh's hand was shaking as he reached above a rack of weapons, but he felt confident in what his hands grabbed onto. The sound of clashing metal continued as Goh entered the arena. Thirteen people sat in the stands observing the current exam. Probably the other chosen scholars. Goh thought. Kibura patted Goh on the back. 'Well, this is as far as I go. Good luck!' She smiled and left back the way they entered. Goh joined with some exhausted looking people equipped with all kinds of weapons, it was obvious that they'd already taken their exams. Goh stood next to a boy leaning against the railing. He had a sniper rifle rested against the railing beside him, and a large combat knife strapped to his hip along with a Desert Eagle. He wore padded thick combat armour and had medium length blonde hair, he was about Goh's age. 'This guy is unbelievable...' he whispered to himself. Goh looked into the arena. It was Red. He was dual-wielding both of his katana, and the instructor wielded a long sword and shield. The instructor was being pushed back on his heels. he timer showed thirty seconds left on the clock. Red and the instructor took a moment to catch their breath. 'You cocky bastard...' The instructor growled at Red. Red cackled. 'What's wrong, sir instructor? Is that all you have to offer?' Red scoffed. 'Pathetic.' The instructor was enraged. He let out a scream and charged at Red. He pumped his kite-shaped shield at Red anticipating Red to strike first. Instead Red had danced to his left where the instructors right shoulder was exposed. The instructor had no time to react as Red sliced his sword horizontally into the instructor's shield-bearing wrist. The instructor howled in pain and released his grip on the shield. Blood began to pool on the ground and the instructor doubled over in pain. Red's eyes dilated like a wild beast at the smell of fresh blood. He brought his sword back to slice but the instructor had regained his bearings, and swivelled several steps back. Red had no intention of letting his prey escape. Launching a series of combinations using both of his swords against the retreating instructor, eventually led to him being backed against the wall of the pit. The instuctors limply held longsword was knocked out of his hand, and he fell down and braced. Red laughed like the maniac that he is. He brought his sword back to deliver the killing blow. The forghorn sounding the end of the battle sounded. The blade stopped just less than a centimeter away from the instructor's face. Piss dribbled down the instructor's leg and it pooled with the blood from his wounds. He was sobbing hysterically. 'Red...' Goh said to himself. The boy next to him looked over to him. 'Ah you must be the rumoured 15th scholar. I was wondering when you'd show up. You know him? He's scary.' Rumoured? Goh thought. 'Yeah, I took the ferry here with him.' The boy nodded his head. 'Nice. I'm Railey by the way. Professional Marksman. I got ranked 390th. I hope we can become friends.' Goh shook his hand. 'I'm Goh. I'm not really a professional anything, but I am a talented boxer.' Railey let out a hearty laugh. 'We know who you are, silly! At any rate, you should get ready. Your exam is starting.' Goh was the most confused he'd been from the start of this whole thing. End of Chapter |
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| Yeah, Red really needs to get his ass kicked, the smug brat. God-of-Harem said: A sword would be cool, preferably something European like a rapier. Or we could go straight to the mecha belt, lol.Sure thing. Any weapon or weapons of choice? |
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| It's starting to get interesting! Red seems to be a cool character! Can't wait for the next chapters! |
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Fuusuke said: It's starting to get interesting! Red seems to be a cool character! Can't wait for the next chapters! Red is so cool indeed :D I hope I can be as cool as him when my character shows up :D but it's up to goh :D |
AkatsukiWolf said: Oh can I join too? I want to that mystery transfer student who doesn't talk. For a weapon I want the ability to telepathically wield thirteen swords to attack and fly with. Oh man, I only just realised your post. Sure man. But I think that weapon is a bit OP. But I think I can do something like that, not to that extent though. |
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| Argh, I hate it when the cocky bastard has the bite to back up the bark :I |
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| i hope someone slaps red right in the dick. |
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| By the way guys, if you do happen to message me how you want your character to be, then you will probably get introduced earlier, because there's less planning for me. |
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| Railey is coolest niqur thus far. |
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YorozuyaGinSan said: Already looking forward to the fated day he's gonna get his sweet double sword-wielding butt handed to him. would be much fun if NarTaco was the one to do it heheYeah, Red really needs to get his ass kicked, the smug brat. Looks interesting. I really like the way you write the fight scenes. Keep up the good work, m8. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| Depending on how things go I'll most likely write two chapters tomorrow. Emnay said: i hope someone slaps red right in the dick. Who has the game to do that though? Perhaps we will find out. Sapewloth said: Looks interesting. I really like the way you write the fight scenes. Keep up the good work, m8. Thanks :D |
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| Funny enough that sounds like about how I would fight in that situation. |
| Interesting so far. Can't wait for red to be defeated by a lesser combatant, then join their team and help them win.... thats what happens in anime at-least. |
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| I gotta keep a log of how everyone wants their characters so I don't have to keep sifting through the thread, my messages, and my profile all the time >,< |
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| Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio? |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio? Would certainly help. But if you want to leave it up to me, then that's fine. |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio? Just have Kibura pm you everyones character bio - she already collected all that with the on highschool thread, rite? :p sneakysneaky edit: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1135607 for reference^^ |
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| Why is it everyone can locate that thread but me when I needed it. |
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Lime_ said: Kibura_Iburasa said: Ok so you want everyone to pm you a character personality bio? Just have Kibura pm you everyones character bio - she already collected all that with the on highschool thread, rite? :p sneakysneaky edit: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=1135607 for reference^^ I'm not sure that I want to do that lol. |
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| Because I stalk you Hmm you can use google to search through MAL threads, end the search with site:myanimelist.net/forum/ no rly, i do stalk you http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/002/a/7/yandere_yuno_gasai_by_yunogasai_marceline-d5q6na7.jpg <3 |
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Lime_ said: Because I stalk you So thats why Ive felt watched recently....http://37.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m02imqXVXw1qbvovho1_500.gif |
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| does what I sent count as a character bio? |
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Emnay said: Did you just send a single, solitaire word?does what I sent count as a character bio? |
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Lime_ said: I didn't send anything to do with slutsEmnay said: Did you just send a single, solitaire word?does what I sent count as a character bio? |
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| Woah Woah, is Jack Slik trying to blow up my spot as Yolozuya Slick G.? 11. ThePimp - Jack Slik Not cool. |
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Emnay said: does what I sent count as a character bio? I've put you down as: 'The slut.' |
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YorozuyaGinSan said: Woah Woah, is Jack Slik trying to blow up my spot as Yolozuya Slick G.? 11. ThePimp - Jack Slik Not cool. Hold the phone, I didn't even know bro, I thought of the name myself. His name is like that for a reason though. |
| Guys, don't expect a new chapter any time soon. http://i.imgur.com/aHzYqT0.png |
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Balls I just sent a character bio, why is he banned? |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: Sniped by rodac. Damn, rodac is on a rampage currently, we should better hide.Balls I just sent a character bio, why is he banned? Reason: http://i.imgur.com/XD3qJsT.png He is still trying to find out the duration |
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Ah when will people learn you don't go crude, crude is the lowest form of humor and insults. Stay classy. I had noticed an increase in crude words from GOH recently tbh. |
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ThePimp said: No you hold the _______ _____ ____, do you think this is funny? You don't know? Yeah, OK ___.YorozuyaGinSan said: Woah Woah, is Jack ____ trying to blow up my spot as Yolozuya _____ G.? 11. ThePimp - Jack ____ Not cool. Hold the _____, I didn't even know ___, I thought of the name myself. His name is like that for a reason though. My ____ in your ____ ____. Edit: Took out the buzz words. |
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| He is now unbanned |
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| well that was interesting turn of events |
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| Wait ____? The ___ was only two _____? _____ ______ me three days for an _______ far more trivial ____ ____ ___ ____. _________ at it's finest. Edit: removed buzz words. |
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| New chapter up soon guys. |
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| _______ back Go_. |
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YorozuyaGinSan said: No you hold the _______ _____ ____, do you think this is funny? You don't know? Yeah, OK ___. My ____ in your ____ ____. Edit: Took out the buzz words. Damn, I came in too late, but I think I can somehow decipher what you originally wrote. |
God-of-Harem said: AkatsukiWolf said: Oh can I join too? I want to that mystery transfer student who doesn't talk. For a weapon I want the ability to telepathically wield thirteen swords to attack and fly with. Oh man, I only just realised your post. Sure man. But I think that weapon is a bit OP. But I think I can do something like that, not to that extent though. That's okay. I just realized how OP it really is lol. Everything else you can just make up along the way except I want my character to be called Wolf. |
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AkatsukiWolf said: Everything else you can just make up along the way except I want my character to be called Wolf. aw man a character called wolf is soo cheesy no offense. They are hard characters to get right with a name like that. Unless they are military and got that nickname by others rather than calling it themselves it comes across as a teenager trying way too hard to be that lone cool guy. I cringe when someone says "Call me...wolf" because a real cool character would never say that. |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: maybe his character can be based around being that edgy teenager trying to be cool kid.AkatsukiWolf said: Everything else you can just make up along the way except I want my character to be called Wolf. aw man a character called wolf is soo cheesy no offense. They are hard characters to get right with a name like that. Unless they are military and got that nickname by others rather than calling it themselves it comes across as a teenager trying way too hard to be that lone cool guy. I cringe when someone says "Call me...wolf" because a real cool character would never say that. |
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Chapter 3: Examination Goh clutched to his weapon-of-choice as he walked down down the stone steps into the pit. He was still concerned with all the events leading up to now, but now wasn't the time for that. Focus. Goh told himself. He felt a nostalgic feeling and his body shivered in excitement. His blood was pumping as he reached his starting position. 'Scholar Number 15! State your name and age!' The examinators announced on the PA. 'Goh! 17 years old!' he shakily replied. 'Instructor. Brief the scholar.' the PA System sounded out. 'Listen here, kiddo. I know you're a special-case, but I'm not going to go easy on you.' He pointed his French Cutlass at Goh. 'What's with that?' The instructor was obviously talking about Goh's weapon. Elbow length gauntlets. Made of pure titanium but suprisingly light. The knuckles where semi-sharp. 'You plan on fighting an armed professional with your fists kid? You just might be more cocky than the last brat.' Goh looked insulted. 'I haven't had much practice with blades and firearms and the like. I'm confident in my fists though, so I'll stick to what I know.' The instructor scoffed and assumed an offensive stance. 'Suit yourself. three minutes on the clock starting in ten seconds. Come at me with the intent to kill.' Goh assumed a textbook boxing stance. The ten second wait was stale and tension clogged the entire arena. Goh swallowed. The foghorn sounded. The instructor wasted no time with waiting. He charged at Goh with full speed. 'Hold your ground.' Goh whispered to himself as if reciting instructions in his head. Using fancy foot-work Goh danced to the right as he approached, attempting to throw the instructor of his balance, but the instructer followed his movements. Goh ducked under the blade, missing it by an inch. A golden opportunity! His body is wide open, a rookie mistake Goh chuckled in his mind. Goh was the one who made the rookie mistake. The instructor brought his right knee into his face at full force, instantly breaking his nose, Goh seemingly flew backwards before landing on his back. This isn't boxing. There are no rules. Goh felt like an idiot. There was no time for that. Goh rolled to his side just in time as the blade pierced the ground beside him. Goh tumbled to his feet. Everything was spinning around him and blood was pouring from his broken nose. The charging instructor was a blur. Goh attempted to keep calm, but his vision was a mess and he lost his footing as he attempted to dodge an attack, and the cutlass sliced his cheek. Goh flailed his arms and landed a lucky hit under the instructor's chin making him stagger backwards. Goh took the chance to retreat and come to his senses. Goh glanced at the clock. Still one minute and thirty seconds remaining. Blood poured from his nose and cheek. His entire face ached intensely. Goh was good under pressure so fortunately he'd regained his composure. Goh breathed deeply out from his mouth as the instructor approached once again. Goh had measured the instructor's reach. About average. The cutlass was about twice the length of an average boxer's reach length. Goh was clearly at a disadvantage... Or perhaps not! The instructor swung his cutlass at Goh's chest. Instead of moving this time Goh assumed a turtle defensive stance, digging his elbows into his gut and covering his face with his fists. The blade bounced off his forearms like a stick would on diamond. Of course! There's no way steel could even dent solid titanium like that! The instructor lost his balance and Goh drove his fist using the force his whole body directly into the instructor's face, repaying the broken nose. The instructor attempted to remain calm as he struggled to remain on his feet, but Goh had set the pace. He ducked under the sword once again, only this time Goh moved so quickly that he gave no time for the instructor to react, Goh crashed his fist into the instuctor's liver and he doubled over and dropped his cutlass. A pool of blood pixed with freshly salvated saliva flew out of the instructor's mouth and he lumped over into a crumpled heap. Five seconds remaing. There was no need to finish him. The instructor was already a pile of mess on the floor. three, two, one... The forghorn sounded. There was a silence in the arena and Goh stood over the instructor. Eventually the PA System clicked on. 'Will all scholars please come to the waiting lounge to recieve your results.' Goh walked back up the stairs out of the pit massaging his broken face. 'Pretty impressive!' Railey called out. 'You and Red were the only ones who could deal that much damage.' Railey laughed. 'But you're the only one who got beaten up so badly.' Goh scratched his head. 'Didn't you already recieve your results?' He asked Railey. 'I did my entry exam yesterday, while everyone else did theirs today. You should probably go join them if you want to see how everybody else did.' Goh nodded his head and joined the group, eager to find out who his classmates are, and how strong they are. End of Chapter 3 So next chapter is when the majority of you will be introduced. (Took longer than I expected). Look forward to it. |
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| Why do the nameless characters have to get their asses kicked? I mean, should the instructor really be weaker than the student? Still, cool fight scene, looking forward to the introductions next chapter. Just don't rush too many characters into it. |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: Ah when will people learn you don't go crude, crude is the lowest form of humor and insults. Stay classy. I had noticed an increase in crude words from GOH recently tbh. Oh... I'm sorry :'( |
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