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Aug 30, 2014 4:12 PM
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I used to be an avid writer, always indulging in the fantasies of other authors. Here's one of the latest chapters from my work on Percy Jackson. (I honestly think Rick Riordan is a terrible author, though).


http://laiml.deviantart.com/art/Percy-and-Annabeth-2-Chapter-25-Annabeth-POV-451685944


Can I get some feedback on my style and grammar?

Aug 31, 2014 4:30 PM
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Can I get a critique?

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