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Apr 23, 2014 10:29 AM

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Apparently I was part of a thread derailment or some bull

Apparently mods don't get that in a discussion between a group of people goes on long enough generally the subject will gradually change with it, like all natural conversations do to stop it becoming stale or retreading. Kinda like the meaning of the words, Casual discussion.
Apr 23, 2014 12:18 PM

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JD2411 said:
This is actually pretty funny

My one criticism is that outside of me and Lupa all the users are nobodies on the forums
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Apr 23, 2014 12:25 PM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Apparently I was part of a thread derailment or some bull

Apparently mods don't get that in a discussion between a group of people goes on long enough generally the subject will gradually change with it, like all natural conversations do to stop it becoming stale or retreading. Kinda like the meaning of the words, Casual discussion.
Yeah that's pretty weird. I myself recieved a warning a few days ago because I apparently participated in the derailment of a thread that had already been derailing for two goddam pages. Didn't know mods used the banhammer for so little.
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GuusWayne said:
there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief

And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat.
Apr 23, 2014 12:29 PM

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Korrvo said:
JD2411 said:
This is actually pretty funny

My one criticism is that outside of me and Lupa all the users are nobodies on the forums
fite me


Our join date's older than yours! Who is JD again?



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Apr 23, 2014 12:35 PM
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Lime_ said:
Korrvo said:
JD2411 said:
This is actually pretty funny

My one criticism is that outside of me and Lupa all the users are nobodies on the forums
fite me


Our join date's older than yours! Who is JD again?
Well actually Lime and Korrvo are the only two I have heard of, but even then you're not infamous like me and my main man Lupadim

I have no idea who the other guys are
Apr 23, 2014 1:02 PM

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JD2411 said:
Lime_ said:
Korrvo said:
JD2411 said:
This is actually pretty funny

My one criticism is that outside of me and Lupa all the users are nobodies on the forums
fite me


Our join date's older than yours! Who is JD again?
Well actually Lime and Korrvo are the only two I have heard of, but even then you're not infamous like me and my main man Lupadim

I have no idea who the other guys are


The only person included in the story that I don't recognise from outside it is Jackrabb1t. Looking at his recent posts it would seem he's mainly in casual discussion, which would explain things as that's the one section of the forums that I don't frequent (well, that and the post-count-spam introductions forum EDIT: and the games section, which I pay so little attention to that I actually forgot that it existed).

Incidentally, I've seen Heredity around more than you and Lupadim combined recently.

I've been following this story since the second chapter. Keep writing it and I'll keep reading it.
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Apr 25, 2014 3:03 PM

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Episode 8 when?! I miss my weekly dose of sexual tension and imagery c.c;

JD2411 said:
Lime_ said:
Korrvo said:
JD2411 said:
This is actually pretty funny

My one criticism is that outside of me and Lupa all the users are nobodies on the forums
fite me


Our join date's older than yours! Who is JD again?
Well actually Lime and Korrvo are the only two I have heard of, but even then you're not infamous like me and my main man Lupadim

I have no idea who the other guys are



When I grow up I wanna be MAL famous like you :( one day,

one day



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Apr 25, 2014 3:13 PM

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Lime_ said:

When I grow up I wanna be MAL famous like you :( one day,

one day


JD was the only character I wrote in without ever actually meeting or even knowing about in the forum haha ^_^ but Lupadim had his hard-on for him so it was only natural to have him as his only true lover.

Lime_ said:
Episode 8 when?! I miss my weekly dose of sexual tension and imagery c.c;


I was banned for a time I couldn't work on it.
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Apr 25, 2014 5:45 PM
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Lime_ said:

When I grow up I wanna be MAL famous like you :( one day,

one day


JD was the only character I wrote in without ever actually meeting or even knowing about in the forum haha ^_^ but Lupadim had his hard-on for him so it was only natural to have him as his only true lover.
I appreciate the work you're putting in and all dude, but how can you not have heard of me?

We even had an argument about whether humans are more important than animals
Apr 25, 2014 5:49 PM

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JD2411 said:

I appreciate the work you're putting in and all dude, but how can you not have heard of me?

We even had an argument about whether humans are more important than animals


I'm sorry I have terrible memory, I remember the thread but not who was who and who was on what side. Our meeting must have been fleeting but at least I know who you are now, also I see you are from The UK as well.
Apr 26, 2014 8:04 PM

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Its been a long time hasn't it.

Part 8

Outside the camp fire burned bright. Uno and Heredity had slouched into more comfortable positions and were poking at the fire, when out came Korrvo charging from his room, knife in hand.
From inside his caravan the sounds of dull thuds were coming closer to the door. Heredity opened one eye lazily yet incredibly focused on Korrvo "and what are you up to?" he spoke quietly and without hurry even as Korrvo passed them towards the back of the camp where Lime was been stored.

Uno rolled over onto his stomach watching Korrvo as well "Hey what's going on now?" he questioned Korrvo
"Nothing go back to your business" snarled Korrvo, turning his head back still approaching the back of the campsite. Heredity was now on his feet, although he didn't appear worried his eyes were still focused. Korrvo moved round the back of the place they had Lime tied, knife in hand he was going to cut his ties and haul him back to Jack and let him watch. The knife gleamed in the light as Korrvo jumped around the corner, it raised only to find...

Nothing.

"what?!" Korrvo's eyes shot over the patch of dirt which should have houses a cowering Lime. Instead a pair of cut binds were left and an empty space. "where are you!" he dug the knife into the wall of the caravan "sneaky, so sneaky" Heredity walked up behind him "You need to calm down, just look at you." Heredity's eyes looked over the frantic Korrvos body "Well still a good looking nut job but just look how messed up one guy has got you. Get it together" Heredity raised his hand and gently slapped it onto Korrvo's noggin. Korrvo let out a loud sign and relaxed his body, before nodding "ok yeah" he turned heredity still resting his hand on his head "We still have a problem" pointing to the empty spot whilst pulling out the knife "We gotta find him before he causes trouble"
He peered over back to where he left Jack, somehow he had managed to wriggle out the door and onto the grassy floor, where Uno was now standing on him as he struggled to get free.
"Your pet tried to escape!" he yelled over to them, bouncing on him like a trampoline making Jack wheeze out his breath.

"I got a plan first though" Korrvo grinned, retuning behind the caravan he pulled up his sleeve and taking the knife ran it across the top of his arm, drawing enough blood to cover the blade. Moments later he was approaching the wriggling Jack under Uno who jumped off him. Korrvo crouched beside him and dropped the knife next his face covered in blood "Sorry but it was for your own good Jack"
Jacks eyes were totally focused on the knife, he had done this. It was his fault this happened because of him Lime was now dead. His eyes slowly rose from the knife "I did it quickly if you are wondering" replied Korrvo pretending to care, Jacks eyes spoke more than any words could, they spoke murder.
Apr 27, 2014 9:46 AM

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Damn, shit's going down!

This is very good, Kibura.
Apr 27, 2014 10:50 AM

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I was almost glad from reading this. But then I realized where you probably remember me from, which in turn took away that gladness.

OT: The more I read this, the more I like Korrvo.

And now to see what exactly an enraged Jack is capable of...
Apr 28, 2014 12:54 PM

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Kousoku11 said:


OT: The more I read this, the more I like Korrvo.

And now to see what exactly an enraged Jack is capable of...


Well you might have to wait a little, writing two stories and doing all the other stuff through the day doesn't leave me much spare time so I'll have to limit the story release from daily to perhaps half weekly. At least for this one. Some days I don't get around to writing a chapter till 4am and Ive been a little worn out over the past few weeks to be honest but I didn't want to disappoint anyone.
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