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| THIS IS A MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER. ---------------------------------------- Same author as Reborn! not bad. Two selves, one in the dream world and one in the real world huh? I suppose that makes sense considering they look different but retains the same personality. I think this got the concept right still but the humor can be a little wacky. |
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| I guess it's an interesting concept for what I'd expect to be the start of a new series. With that being said, who can honestly say that they didn't see the whole "little kid turns into bishounen" thing coming from a mile away? |
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| It's pretty good, to say the least. I think it'd do better than KHR if she made it into a series. I hope it does get made into a series, because the concept is pretty alluring. |
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| Has some potential, Tonka was irritating as hell though "I've made the rite of passage to adulthood" my ass ya foolish little girl whom "hates kids". The whole Baku reveal was way too abrupt, this concept really screams to be fleshed out into a series and I guess that's what we're holding out for, huh. Girl tries to break into other people's dreams, shady bald guy tells her to jump down to his level, bald guy tells her about the conflict between such and such with the Baku, random and completely unfounded "you're a baku" comment from Tonka (hurr hurr she smert), guess we can chalk that shoddy writing up to time constraints but eh. |
OchimushaApr 10, 2014 6:25 PM
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| I don't think this one has this much of a potential... |
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| Not too bad. But I think Tonka's character needs to be modified a little. Her attitude can be a little annoying |
| Didn't like this one tbh...Tonka's character especially did not help. Of course with this being a Amano series, she couldn't keep Netaro as a shota forever and had to turn him into a bishi smh. 5/10 |
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| I enjoyed this. It was a bit rushed but that's excusable for a one-shot. I'm completely okay with the shota turns into bishounen gig. Amano's artwork is too good for me to care. I haven't read Eldlive but concept-wise, this is a lot better. |
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