The art was good, and probably was one of the strongest points to this manga. Which is what it needed to be seeing as how most of this manga seemed to be geared to fanservice. And that's what it was probably was because the story took a nose dive real fast. Not to say it was terrible but it did seem some what scattered making you wonder if this was indeed the same author that wrote chokotto's sister. Well a hint could be seen in the beginning which was probably the best part of the manga to me. The few chapters started out pretty strong actually. It had a nice setting and though it was incoherent played out pretty interesting. At this point many of the jokes that would later be reused (much to my dissappointment) were fresh and enjoyable.
It had the feeling the it could be a strong and rather enjoyable romantic comedy. Something different a little stronger of a romantic interest, same kind of plain hero but really that's almost to be expected of the forumla....Then it came to it's first story arc. No spoilers will be said but it was interesting a very nice spin on a very old kind of story. But around this point was when it took a harder fall then Lady Gaga's career. It turned into a crazy mess with things that really just didn't make sense. Seemingly trying to pull through using insanity and trying to top the last weird thing. To a point where I was seriously thinking about setting fire to my computer.
It was clear that the writer lost his focus seemingly crossing from a ecchi romance comedy to just an ecchi comedy. Though he seemed to understand this and return to his old formula. But with just a little less spark turning it into a very average story. Very eposidic little character development and less development between the romance interest and the main character. Instead it seemed to shift it's focus on satire and the development that was done was mainly to Kagari(Hikari's sister) and takechi than to Hikari and Takechi. Setting it up for the ending which was sudden and with little back drop aside from a few mentions in earlier chapters. As fast as it comes is as fast as it ends, leading one to believe the author wanted to end this as painlessly as possible. And he did a good job to because the ending wasn't nearly as bad as I expected it to be though it wasn't any award winner , more of a blah.
Leaving a very unremarkable if not bitter memory of how much potential the manga had and how much was wasted in the prusuit of cheap laughs and ALOT of fanservice.
4/10 overall nothing big if you're bored one day and want to read a manga to waste time or for some cheap laughs this is your manga, other wise move on.
