Reviews

It's got a slow start, but the story won me over on chapter 4, where the author actually creates an actual issue between two Human Beings and resolves it in a natural, satisfying way. She and her sister don't get along. Her sister is harsh to everyone, and FMC herself doesn't like sharing her art. Problem is she took up art to get closer to her sister. The most FMC would manage to do it sneak a drawing into her sister's hands, then run away before hearing anything. She asked her sister why she likes drawing so much, and when she said she likes seeing people react to said art, it all finally clicked. She already experienced that herself, which was the push she needed to finally show her sister her work and bond.

BAM. See? Nobody was just a dick out of nowhere, and we didn't solve years of abuse, neglect, and alienation with some retarded little speech about family, or forgiveness. There was a small clash in personalities, and the the story naturally bridged the gap without trying to force the audience to "Forgive" anyone for anything. They just finally saw eye to eye, and they got along better.