At first I wasn't even gonna write a review for this cause I thought it isn't even worth it. Then I thought to write one to steer away all the innocent readers who are pulled in by the title and convinced by the ratings that this is good.
Now, I agree, that the synopsis is different, unique, new; and throw in any other words fitting for this weird premise which I somewhat had a hunch that something like this is gonna be produced someday. A fresh take on the NTR genre which everyone detests? HELL YEAH!!
Disappointment of the utmost level is the only thing this manga managed to provide me. The weird thing about "unique" premise is anyone can think of it. Hell even I can make up a premise about a guy reincarnated as bathroom, bra, laptop, water, etc. But the thing is, the "unique" premise should have an additional thing going for it :- STORY.
Let's talk about the abomination which is somehow guised as plot. Starting was fine, MC gets transferred into the NTR doujin, actively tries to avoid the girl in order to avoid the NTR route, things were looking fine. Then shit starts to happen, MC is like "Oh she's following me? Meh" with no real effort to avoid her, girl becomes extremely clingy for some reason, and then the author dropped the fucking bomb - "I did yo mom". Oh such a classic.
Now someone can brush this off as "Its his canon event bro", but sadly that does not apply to the story in any way other than as a meme. Or someone can come up with "Its cause he got transferred into an NTR hentai that's why the people are extremely retarded" but it is the real problem I think. The author tried to go so deep into the NTR hentai that the end result he produced WAS an NTR hentai, just without sex scenes. All the things, story, plot progression, characters are comparable only to an hentai which sadly is not a level high enough even for an average manga, decent manga is an extremely long shot.
And with the latest chapter all of the effort is like PUFF!! He ended up doing what he wanted to avoid wasting all the things that he did, and the effort to avoid the NTR route was not even that full blown to begin with to actually make me care about the reason about why he did what he did. I am convinced that the author's initial thought was to make a harem manga but gave it an NTR-ish premise to turn many heads as possible into seeing this hot piece of garbage. I am saying this because this weird gimmick only lasted 9 chapters unless the author brings some out of the world twist.
Talking about the characeter, MC's initial demeanor was fine, but after sometime he became someone more befitting to be present in a shoujo manga. The "friends with benefits" girl is the only one I sort of like with the main "heroine" straight up being super clingy that it comes off as unrealistic. The author tried to villainize the childhood friend so forcefully that I did not even come to hate him which was apparently the author's intention. The author wrote the story trusting the reader's "suspension of disbelief" to pan out the bad writing of the manga which failed miserably.
There is no real reason for you to read this unless you are pulled in solely by the synopsis itself. It is the worst of both worlds. Story is not good enough to be a manga and the scenes are not erotic enough for it be a hentai. Lastly I would like to quote a comment I saw while reading this perfectly explaining it :-
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Plot summary
MC: *saves girl*
Girl: "You are good guy"
MC: "I slept with many woman, yo mom included"
Girl: "Thank you, do me too"
MC: "Ayo wtf?" *confused*
Girl's mom: "Yeah do her too"
MC: "Dafuk wrongs with you people?!" *scared*
Girl's childhood friend: *Autistic screeching*
MC: *run for his life*
Poor fella can't escape from hungry biches...
-a quoted comment of "Isekai Potata"
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