What exactly author wants to tell? What exactly happen within conflict happen, if happen how to solve them? It just like author stacking lots conflicts in this story but it have no idea how it is done. Even adding more conflict so reader may quite confused like what? But those critic review may can be forgotten because the art is good maybe rather like erotic doujinshi manga.
About the story
Because this manga contain up to 5+ volumes, storyline may unpredictable because reader may think "oh there's a problem/conflict perhaps the next chapter/volume will give some explanation to solve" but in fact, they don't. Which means, the story is stacking conflict and in the end, is just like throw it all. Tbh, I kinda disappointed for the ending.
About the art
Yes, it is good art. Perfect for the story which contain a lots an a lots erotic things. The author perhaps better make erotic manga tho.
About the character
The MC is well deserved, kinda dumb. And the heroine, dunno why feeling deja vu when seeing Rikka. Especially on last volume.
Personally, enjoy the art. But the story, perhaps it doesn't. Because it's kinda confusing, thanks to translator which can well-translated dialogues when they doing erotic things too. Keep in mind, this manga contain NTR things. Why I feel like deja vu when seeing Rikka...
