But the world building of this medieval society is among ridiculous. Same goes to the plot. The scene and the dialogue are not natural as well.
A butler of one of the most influential family in the kingdom seek out those among the commoners who know how to read to organize the library upon moving. This task is so important and your whole family will be executed if you tell people about it.... And everyone in this noble family is extremely discriminating this poor MC just because he's a commoner.
Ok, one of the noble son became friend with MC. Guess what, a commoner becoming a friend with a noble is a crime. A crime that is so unforgivable that the MC needs to be executed.. I am beyond speechless at this point and I have to drop.
I'd rate the world building absolutely 0. But it has its highlight. so I'd give it 4 out of 10 overall.
