At times, the complications weren't that believable - almost like...they were just there to be there. I think there were times where, the two main characters just didn't really seem to go together. Not all was bad, but some things I'm just trying to figure out what is going on - like why does it seem like abuse (from anyone) is okay?
There is nothing bad with these stories. I just feel like if it focused on some of the characters a bit more (having more than just one story), it might have helped with their developing. Of course, ending up together is always a good ending - especially the chapter where they have kids to raise.
Another thing I did not care for was that the sex scenes were censored - even if it was semi-censored. So keep it uncensored, if you please. I don't know if other people will like it, but I suppose they should at least give it a chance.
