It’s a cute story but nothing beyond that.
My main complaint is misinterpretation of the word love. Possibly my own issue though. After my own series of events, I tend to lose interest if love is declared immediately. You have a crush; you are not in love… and I know, oh so many manga’s fall into this category.
Nanaka falls for Chihaya pretty much at first sight. They have similar personalities, they understand each other, and I see the attraction. But literally this manga takes place over like four days tops? And on day two Nanaka is confessing her love. It’s cute and sweet and all that, but it’s nothing I haven’t I seen before and seen done better none the less.
The ending bothered me as well. It’s a happy ending but only on the short term.
Would I recommend it? Sure why not, it’s only 5 chapters, took me probably 15mins at the most to read. Would I read it again? Nope.
Story: 5 [OK]
Art: 8 [very good]
character: 4 [decent] -literally no development so ehh
enjoyment: 7 [good]
overall: 6 [fair]