So I'm not a violence crazed maniac that needs to see blood to be sated, nor am I a pacifist that will want to see even the most vile person be set free after committing terrible acts. However this has the worst payoff for any revenge story I have ever read. The MC was absolutely justified in trying to get her revenge, but even putting aside the fact that this was clearly axed, we got no payoff, no satisfaction, no enjoyment. the MC pulls an outof nowhere 180 and just says "eh, maybe I shouldn't get revenge on the ONE person that deserves it above all else." I'd even be fine with the author making the MC suffer for having carried out the revenge getting no catharsis from it, but we arent even granted that, this pissed me off so much that I went out of my way to write a review. Yes, it is short, but no do not read it. a 10/10 world and idea with a 2/10 execution. Which is unfortunate because it starts so good.
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