The story felt very rushed- it really could have been stretched out much longer. Even the individual events occurred so quickly, I would be jolted from my immersion. For example, one page was the couple kissing and the next was straight prawn. What? I was so surprised by how quickly things escalated. The characterization, while being mostly consistent, would occasionally be all over the place. I also wish Junko would design some more unique characters. These look good, but her characters to tend to look ridiculously similar to each other.
The central plot is a bit cliché, not necessarily bad, but is excecated poorly. The story constantly had me going "wait, what?". Despite all this, I did think it was a fun read and was able to get through it all in one sitting.
