Jul 5, 2021
Got to be real I am extremely disappointed. I really enjoyed Innocent despite its many flaws. The plot was disconnected, the pacing was pretty bad in some places, the sex/hallucination scenes were a bit overdrawn, and the time skips were too many. Still, the story was divided in mimi arcs which were really well done and even if the time skips fucked the pacing up, the arcs carried over the development of the characters while still being self contained. This is where Innocent Rouge makes a decision that turns a potentially amazing story into a really mediocre one. Even when the characters still hold up (at least as far as I read), what happens to them isn't even a plot or a story. Random events (which barely develop the characters) just happen at them. Sure, some of them can be related to the current status of their world but we don't see how it affects it because of the time skips and multiple perspectives. Also the sex scenes go way too far. I know why they are there but the author shows as much as posible all of the time for virtually no reason. Obviously the art is still amazing but when the main character of your manga forgets the abuse she suffered under her brother just because you want them to team up and execute a character then you might need to re-read your previous work.
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