I am a bisexual male who leans very gay, but I find most yaoi quite lacking, so when I'm in the mood for hentai, I make do with hentai made for het men of course. Something I immediately noticed and very much appreciated was that the male characters were not either generic afterthoughts, just drawn poorly, or straight-up unattractive. Nimi especially is adorable. Both of the main girls are also quite nice. The art in general is my favorite, though I'll admit everyone kinda looks like they've been dipped in oil once or twice.
The story is of course absurd and I don't know if any social commentary was intended, but I'd argue it is very possible to have that be a valid interpretation, despite whatever the intention was. Everyone at least pretends that rape is a horrible thing, but many see it as an acceptable punishment for "criminals" and occasionally also other "low-lifes". There is perhaps also commentary on people in general being too willing to accept new social norms because they came from a higher authority, no matter how terrible.
Also, under capitalism, everyone is coerced into selling their bodies, though sex work is considered "worse" by most partly because sex is usually (or "supposed to be") an intimate activity between lovers. Many sex workers (apparently including our 2 main girls), however, consider sex work to be less humiliating than and most preferable to any other kind of work. I would know that actually having a kink for humiliation helps a lot. ;o)
