Story: The plot is heavily cliched for the first half of the book, then speeds up dramatically in the second part to where nothing makes sense and you are left wondering what is going on. It's just a series of unexplained plot points. There is no real flow to the story and it leaves the reader cold. We are told a lot of things, but never really shown anything. The romance between the main characters I found to be forced and unbelievable. It didn't feel like yuri at all. What would have made this better is if the story was given more chapters and volumes to grow. Everything gets squeezed into two volumes and the plot really suffers because of it and things feel unbelievable.
Art: The artwork is decent and nice to look at. Nobody looks the same, which is nice. However, the action scenes lack any kind of action. Which brings me back to the story. If this had been expanded, leaving more room for action scenes and better explanation of what was going on, the story would have flowed better. Instead, the artwork oftentimes uses lazy transitions and stuff randomly appears without explanation. It makes the reader very confused as to what is happening.
Characters: The characters are cliched and pathetic. I could not root for anyone, because I didn't know any of them. People were randomly thrown into scenes and once again we were told things about them, instead of shown things about them. None of them where properly fleshed out and none of them grew at all.
Enjoyment: It took me 24 days to complete this, because every time I thought about finishing this, I cringed. It was a chore to read.
Overall: I was very disappointed. I bought this thinking it was going to be a great yuri story only to find out it has a broken rollercoaster of a plot and a pathetic cast of stereotypical characters. I would not recommend this to anyone. Only read if you are into mindless yuri, fan service, and don't really care about plot.
