Why i liked the ln would be about the desired fantasy mix with smooth flow of story. Unlike some half hearted ln, this ln goes smoothly describing characters while avoiding sudden jumps but still keeping up the surprise. I mostly prefer fantasy settings with a light mix of science so this ln keeps me going. I really support the author for how the story is going on. A few flaws from my prospectives would be in some parts the story goes too slow while the part on fast pace part is good. I would say try keeping the speed but still explaining details. Overall it is an enjoyable ln especially for those who like isekai type with op mc.
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